Would you mind if I used this if I ever need some sort of song for the vermin in my fic?
-Jarrtail

I see you've snitched lyrics from "Fifteen Men":

And there they lay, aye, damn my eyes
Looking up at paradise
All souls bound contrariwise
Yo ho ho and a bottle of rum.

*huggles Blaggut*
*gets grog spilled all over herself*
Eurgh.

That was awesome!

Very good. I always wanted to know 'ow the old sea rat shanty ended. Ah, but ol' Blaggut sure did know what 'e was talkin' about when 'e was talkin' 'bout drunk sea rat crews!

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

By the way, apologies in advance, I have had to plagiarise your songfic for use in the Avatar : The Last Airbender section, which has suffered a dramatic decline in the standard of fic. It's terrible. At this rate, you should consider posting it in every section.

That was pretty good.

Your verses fit in with the original very nicely!
The note at the end was my favorite part, too.

bleah

that was quite good. The note from Abbot Saxtus at the end was the best. And your summary on the Table of Contents Page was good too and fit with the song.

(shivers) Yeah, that was gory. But still, it was actually alright. I could tell that you were running out of rhymes becaus, at the end, the quality didn't look so good. But, ending on a posotive note, it was a pretty good poem.