I loved this poem.It was so awesome.I tryed writing poems and I made some good ones but yours is awesome.


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I loved the rhythm of the poem...the crispness, and the colours mixed with the movement and the emotions interspersed with sounds of varying degrees and volumes. It's so surreal and yet so real! Loved it!

i like it, sigh i wish im able to have moments like those... *hangs head and mutters "as if,"*

How cool is this? Obv. very cool and VERY nice. It was beautifully written and well done. I loved it. And I also happen to like poetry. ^_~

great so deep words