Sweet fic..

Happy New Year.-.

Oh, that was sweet. I don't think I've read a fanfic with Cloud talking to his father before. I liked the interaction between them.

The tenses are a problem though. The story switches between past and present tense all the time, sometimes even in mid-sentence. It needs to be consistent.

Aww, twas so cyoot! :)

That was a very cute story... I liked it a lot! I can't really find a bad part in this story. It made sense and the ending was very sweet.

Good job!

-Tolkienologist