Excellent, excellent introduction you have here.

I was wondering why I hadn't heard of this story earlier to see that you haven't updated in a while.

I haven't read the other chapters yet, but I can tell they're going to be amazing.

I don't know if you're going to continue this story; it would be a travesty if you didn't.

I remember starting to read this a little while back, when you only had the fourth chapter out. I'm glad I came back to get up to date.

My favorite RO fic, m'thinks. Good job!

...I await your update. I am chilled.

Wow.

Cool. You could use ctrl+f to check for the ghost's name, you know?

You updated yay! I'm so happy! :3 Lise's obsessed with that card aint she? Dx Poor NightEyes, too, all sad.

Awesome :D~

*adds 2 favourite*

update soon

Oh noes plot sticking. You can try reading other fanfics or watching animes xD. Thats where some of my plots come from, and sometimes, they come to me when I'm wandering in a dungeon. Anyways, try to get unstuck before you update because then you'll get superstuck. (This is why my stories are dead...x.x)

awesome writing skills. it's been long since i last got caught up in an unofficial story

It's not that much of a spoiler for Things Unforgotten, but it does help give some back ground for it. It's nice that this story is some how connected to one of the other one's you're working on. The part were the Hatii is hunted so much makes me sad, poor wolf. The ending part sound like either she is going to send him to the next plane, bring him back to life, or some thing like she is going to die. It will be interesting to see what happens.

Yay! I'm obsessed with this story now o.o. You gotta update as soon as possible. (don't be discouraged if people rarely review, alot of people [like me] read then forget to review x.x)

It certainly is turning into a story of obsession. What drives a man (or in this case a woman) to his ruin. Will Lise let it go that far? Is the ghost just as obsessed with her? I like how the storyline is shaping up.

I've noticed a few grammar or flow issues, the kind that you might notice if you went back and reread things when they weren't so fresh in your mind, but overall, it looks good.

O_O Diabolos. They're quite cute. I'm always baffled at how people keep them in the air.

Whew, this keeps getting better and better. :D ...I don't know quite what it is that makes these characters so likable...they're endearing, hm? They're human, I guess, so it's satisfying to relate to them. You did really well with that :3.

Feather's hilarious. I don't think I know anyone like her...perhaps except myself, for the lunch remark. I really do believe she's good at what she does...for a person who spends day and night in the library, what else could you expect?

But Lise...she's horribly curious XD. It could be her downfall. She has some torrid fascination with that ghost. And the fact that she reminds him of his wife...there's going to be trouble -laughs-. I have the feeling that even when she leaves for Lutie, she'll still be thinking about him.

:D More? -cookies-

Yay yay!! =D　 *resists urge to blurt out name* updateupdateupdate ^^