Wow *-*""
I really love Shinogu *-*"
Your end are very good, more than the mangá >_< (I hate the end in the manga... Ryoki wich Hatsumi... EK!)
Nice work!

*3*/

Ahh, I loved it! I just finished reading the final volume of Hot Gimmick, and this was the first fanfic I allowed myself to read afterwards... and what a fanfic it was. :) Keep writing!

This was a fantastic story! I was definitely not satisfied with the ending provided by Aihara-san, and this ending had all the best parts of a good story: lots of conflict, and the good guy gets the girl in the end (I was on Team Shinogu the whole time... ^^ ). The writing itself was very well done, with only minor grammatical/spelling/phrasing errors here and there. I hope to come across more of your writing in the future!

I am extremely impressed. With almost every fanfiction I've read (and there have been more than I care to admit), the main and most annoying problem has been that it just didn't seem like any of it was what the character's would do. I don't want to read something that doesn't even involve the characters I love. You, on the other hand, have pulled off the characters beautifully. As I was reading it, I was convinced I was actually reading a continuation from the author, even though it was in novel format rather than manga. Bravo, and keep writing!

You did a great job. Good Hot Gimmik fics are so hard to find and I've always been a ShinoguxHatsumi fan, so this was great to read. Look forward to more of your work!

-Lila

great story! keep up the good work :-)

Beautiful, I'm glad that she took her time and truly thought about what was best for her, and debated all the options open to her. In my heart this is the ending I really wanted, and I'm glad that's she's finally able to open herself up to the one who loved her the most. I look forward to the next chapter, and cross my fingers for that one shot.

Thank you for the update! You had me thinking she was going to choose the other guy... tricky trickster. I'm happy with the route you've decided to take with this fic. =) Keep it up!

I have really enjoyed this fanfic.. lots of drama and twists..Shinogu was a good choice I think and I can't wait for the next few clsing chapters!! Also would love to read the Asuza X Hatsumi fic :)!

Great chapter, keep it up. I can't wait for the next one!

amazing chapter :D
Im looking forward to reading chapter 8
and Im totally voting for Shinogu

I totally love this story! It's great! I think she should end up with Shinogu, cause in the series he was the only boy who did not hurt her in some way, I mean, seriously! Azusa tried to gang rape her!! In any case, I can't wait for another chapter! good work!

Shinogu got such a raw deal in the manga; I really want a happy ending for him in your story. Azusa is an okay alternate choice just for the fact that he isn't Ryoki (bleh). If you are having so much trouble deciding, do an alternate ending. I've been meaning to pick up Hot Gimmik's alternate ending with Shinogu but I heard it isn't all that great. But it's got to be better than her giving into abusive Ryoki though.

AWESOMESAUCE STORY, please update soon! :)

I really have enjoyed your fanfic and have been keeping up with it since the beginning. I did not want Hatomi to end up with Ryoki - I didn't care for the ending in the manga though over all I really enjoyed it. Ty for not choosing him :). I can see why you'd have a hard time choosing between Azusa and Shingu - I know I can't pick as I like like both possiblities alot!! Also can't wait to here more on Aine and Subaru!