*gasps* kimiella! i has to draw that now!

I know it says you are finished with this one, but it would be so awesome if you could go further with it.

Message me about it if you think it's possible! :3

Slightly scary, that Watanuki would ever join a cult. Especially given the types of cults there are out this in Japan. *twitches involuntarily*

Your errors are errors that are pretty standard to most people's works. They just need a little polishing, insofar as to things that an editor would look for ... spelling, grammar, etc. I wouldn't read your stuff if I thought it was bad. Even so, I wouldn't read your stuff unless it entertained me. I've read almost everything you've written; so.

I guess, if you still need a beta or editor or proofreader or whatever, I can do it. I have, unless I warn you otherwise, a 24 hour turn around. Which can be made small if necessary.

Anyway, interesting shortie.

i think if this were any longer i'd be crying.

Me:omygosh can't you try to continue this? ITs so cool. Whe *evil dance of own origin*

Muse#1: can't you do more? *pouts*

Muse#2: stop bothering her for crying out loud, she doesn't need to be disturbed by you type.

Muse#1: My type? What do you mean? *hurt*

Muse#2: The corny type, the one that wants it to end.

Muse#1: don't you want it to end?

Muse#2: not really, I'm more mature then that *sniff*

Me:Ignore those two above, and forgive me for spilling my mental arguments into these pages. But really suspence man, wish you continued with it.

You know you could have saved face by turning it into a incognito trip for sake Wata was ordered to pick up for Yuuko in the dead of the night. Aie, this is so weird.

Kimiella, and prince Doumeki...

Don't insult your writing that much :P if you weren't good, I wouldn't be reading everything new you put up. :( I lack time, unfortunately, but I can proof things you want proofed. I might miss something myself, but I'll definitely do my best , I don't like changing random things in other people's stories though, so if you want someone to kill your babies, it's not me. I might make suggestions and take it from there if you make a disaster - which I haven't seen yet and continue to doubt you will EVER do :o

Ok, that's it _