Hmm... That was interesting. Truthfully I only clicked on it because I thought it was going to end as a SasuNaru instead of SaiNaru (you really should change that), but it still was well written and humorous.

I'm dissapointed though since I am 100% devoted to my boys sasunaru forever. Admittedly, Sasuke left and all, and can be a total jerk to naruto, but they were still made for each other and go perfect together!! Seriously, it ** me off that some people seem to think sasuke doesn't deserve naruto. What the he'll kind of statement is that? Besides, you can't help who you love, and let's be real for a second: sasuke and naruto have real chemistry, sai and naruto don't. (sasuke does need to hurry up and come back to naruto though because honestly this story is plausible... He might actually pick sai under these circumstances, if only for comfort. He'd simply be...settling though.)

Anywho, that sasunaru part on the mountain was so sweet, and the story really is good despite the obvious lackluster sainaru stuff (lol). You really should make this a twoshot, where after some time passes sasuke comes back and more love triangle stuff ensuses. I really do love love triangles! ;) And if you did do a two shot, maybe end it with sasunaru please?

I'll take my leave now, since I know alot of sai lovers are glaring, but I will say this--
- lovely story, I enjoyed it! (except the sainaru ending, yuck!)
- sai is epic fail
- naruto, sasuke and sasunaru/narusasu is TOTAL WIN *nods knowingly*

ah, so utterly cute- i mean Sai. XD his efforts to slowly get to Naruto makes me so warm inside :3

i also like the note that the oneshot ended on- Sasuke still not giving up. XD

all in all, loved it~

ahahah!

i really liked this!
It had humor, and some romance, and a little adventure, and a little angst...and YAOI! oh, it was so good!
This is such an awesome story, and your writing is good as well, so i wasn't distracted by random typos or funny-worded sentences.
thank you so much for writing and posting this!
and I guess i'll just have to imagine sasuke trying to win naruto back, huh? :]

I vote for Sai and Naruto. At one point of the fic, I was quite alarmed by Sai's jealous behavors and wondered (with a typical drama watching mindset) whether Sai was going to be the villain in this story. But as you've shown, every character has their story, and once you learn them, it's rather hard to hate them. Sai's jealousy and the action he took to mislead Sasuke, bit immoral as it had been, made him human and relatable.

Admittedly, I was never quite taken with SasuNaru, because to me, Sasuke seem too self focused to sport a healthy relationship. To each their own.

Eh, I'm not usually into Sai and Naruto together, but you made this really cute with them! Although, still rooting for Sasuke in the end :P. Or, like Ino suggested... threesome :D?! Haha, somehow, it's hard to imagine Sasuke and Sai getting along well enough for that...

oh my god! this is absolutly AMAZING!
its is So well written! i LOVE it! i wish there was more to it! ^3^

Aw so Sai won. I waving a "Go Sasuke" flag though. I'm glad you ended it like that, like Naruto still has options left.

What a great fic. I would normally suggest that people split up one-shots that are so long, but yours is perfect. Putting it into multiple chapters would take something away from it (maybe the flow?). Anyway, I really enjoyed this fic. Thanks so much.

This is the best SasuNaruSai that I've read ever...

I feel so bad for Sasuke!!

I had hoped this would end in threesome... I can't help being a perv >/>

Blasphemy! I could kill you but then I'd have to kill myself for reading.

Well what can I say? Fearing it was a threesome I skimmed it, then it got interesting and I was so glad it was an actual triangle (oh you know how most fanfics don't actually correspond to what they claim hence my threesome fears)

SasuNaru is love baby (SNIFF) but in light of the stopid manga and in what you have written I am so glad someone finally got to love the Dobe as he should be loved, as he deserves to be loved.

Besides that bloody teme seems off balance which I suppose is natural.

Now if you ever repeat any of the above, other than the SasuNaru is love baby STATEMENT, then I will be forced to deny, deny, deny :)

Long but definitely focused!

** yeah! Sai won! I was getting so sick and tired of Naruto shacking up with Sai, or Sai falling in love with Naruto, and then having Naruto ditch him as soon as Sasuke gets back! I also feel soo bad for Sai.

I know that Sasuke is going to try and win Naruto back, but personally... Sai will always win in my eyes! Booyah! Take that duck-butt.

Good one-shot It was the perfect length.

~Twiny

[Sai braced a hand on the wall, and hooked a finger into the waistband of Naruto’s pajamas, tugging once for emphasis.

“A housewife wouldn’t have a **, Naruto,” he said, smiling in a way that made Naruto’s belly flip.]

asdfjas;lfkja;jfl you made my day. Sai being so seductive and innocent at the same time is damn hot. I think your style of writing is wonderful and I love all the humorous bits. This is the only Sasuke/Naruto/Sai triangle fic I've ever liked and I hope you'll be writing more of it!

that was beautifully written ^_^. I've always enjoyed Sai and Naruto pairing; but it is a shame that there are too little of them written. I am glad that I've stumbled across this fic. It was awesome ^_^

I find it very amusing that, coming across this fic after so long (I haven't read Naruto fic for a very long time, now), I find my perspective entirely changed.

I believe when I first read his fic I was rooting for Sasuke, so when I began reading it again and had this strange feeling that I had read it before, I had a slight impending sense of dread. However, I was now reading it cheering Sai on, as I have much love lost for Sasuke. It's a happy-ish ending, isn't it, for either of them, though, isn't it?

Well, needless to say I enjoyed it just as much (that is, immensely), if not more, the second pass through. Actually, I'm pretty sure it was this fic that turned me on to Naruto&Sai, even if I was cheering for Sasuke at the time.

ANYway, a lovely read, again! Now I'm off to find more of your fics. I hope to see more from you~