I really don't think anything I can think of saying would do this justice. Holy cow. Your writing is fantastic, and the idea itself was brilliant. I liked how it jumped around, the diaorganized-ness really gave the impression of a dying man's thoughts. Anyways, beautiful work, I loved it.

This one was really sweet and it honestly sounded realistic. Excellent job and extremely well-written.

This is so cute!
a little confusing at first but the way you portrayed it was so sweet!

Gorgeous! I liked the structure of the fic too. The time jumps were pretty graceful, if you ask me. Nice.

Very nicely done. Sweet, moving and sad. Thanks for listing it!

I'm not sure about the ending - it seemed a little abrupt - but the historical moments are very well written. I like this a lot.

awsome story dude i especially liked the ending one of the best i've ever seen and i've seen alot keep up the good work *wipes little tear from eye*plz keep writing

Oh, wow. This was an AMAZING story. I've always wished that there was more information on Zabuza and Haku-their relationship, what with Haku being the perfect weapon, is so interesting.

i loved your fanfic.