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| hedonistbyheart 2008-07-04 ch 14, anon. | abusewell, I'm reading this and I'm enjoying it very much so please do continue!^^ you just have a way with words and descriptions that blow me away - if you are at all able, please finish this! |
| Kitala 2008-06-23 ch 14, | abuseSo glad that you updated, I'm excited to see how the battle between D and Drac pans out! |
| Mierkai 2008-06-17 ch 14, | abuseWonderful chapter. I really loved how you played the role of the humans after the desert. Your work is excellent please continue. |
| Kitala 2008-05-01 ch 13, | abuseAnother fantastic few chapters- I loved the descriptions of the battle, especially. |
| Zero Unit 2008-03-21 ch 12, anon. | abuseVery nice story and rather well written >.> Hope to see it updated soon and keep up the good work! |
| Rayvne Rayne 2008-02-19 ch 12, | abuseDon't hold out on me!! I have been following this story and I like it very much, do continue. |
| the bird an the bee 2007-11-22 ch 11, anon. | abusethat was ** great. expecialy the part with the simbiont. :D |
| Night Cat2 2007-11-15 ch 11, | abuseGreat story. You can tell that you've put a lot of thought and effort into it. |
| Kitala 2007-11-13 ch 11, | abuseVery well done- I love the descriptions of the symbiot! Kudos! I can't wait to see more. |
| Saeth Ceirwyn 2007-08-02 ch 10, | abuseOh my, this is good. I just stumbled across this story and I have to say its one of the best childhood D stories I've read. You're doing a good job keeping D in character. I can't wait to see where you're taking this story. |
| The Sacred and Profane 2007-07-28 ch 2, | abuseAnother great chapter Fallon-dono! Action was cool but where's D? Keep up the excellent work. |
| VincentValentine13 2007-07-26 ch 10, | abuseYou know, somehow, you alluded to a return by Vice, and so the moment I read Beast Men in the title, I knew it would his not so triumphant return. He really is irritating, and somehow, I feel a bit sorry and embarrassed for the snake-boy. But, alls well that ends well, I suppose. Now, we only have to wait for dear D to awaken, and then all really will be well, even if the grave is shallow. |
| John Perry 2007-07-19 ch 9, | abuseAwsome story can not wait for the next chapter |
| AnotherOtherPerson 2007-07-12 ch 9, | abusewow great story! i started reading the first chapter and i couldn't stop until i read chp 9. All in all i think the story is very strong. THe characters are especially well developed. To often you get stories that have a great plot but the characters are just weak. It's sorta sad really. Anyways I sorta laughed when i got to chapter 4 when the Count called Reah Integra. I wasn't expecting a slight hellsing crossover, at least i assume thats what that was. She mentions Integra not being her name anymore? hm. Well all i can say is i hope that gets explained a little bit later on. I can't really ask what thats all about since that would defeat the purpose of reading to find out haha. well good job anyways. keep up the good work! |
| VincentValentine13 2007-07-09 ch 9, | abuseHhm...it makes me wonder if Zhou held that crucifix with him through the need of one in battling vampires...or if it was to protect himself from D should the need arise? Truly, an enigma...one that won't be solved until your next chapter, I'm afraid! All in all, from what you've posted so far, this story is exceptionally well written, keeping with the tradition of the Vampire Hunter D series. I am very impressed and hope to see more. And the mome rather outgrabe... |