When are you going to update? It's been a decade, I'm tired of waiting!

There's no plot I can see, and you spelled Beretta as Berreta and called it German, when it's actually Italian. Inexcusable.

I know it's been four years since you've typed this but...please update...this fic has caught my attention...I'd like to know what happens next...

MAKE A SEQUAL ALREADY exellent

THE BEST FICK I READ

it was very good but can you continue it i wanna know who was the person who had his/her gun pointed to it

That was a sweet fic. I will have to read some of your others? What happen's next?

great! keep writing

It's not horrible... The biggest thing that bothered me about this story is that there were an awful lot of typos and grammatical errors. It may be a lesser point, but if you concentrate just a little bit harder on presentation, it will make the story overall easier to read. That will give it a more natural flow, as well, which will only help your readers.

This story is so cool! I can't wait for the rest!

this story sucked major butt the author didnt even think the action scenes, the dialog was haphazard. out of a 10 star rating system I give it a 1/2 a star

Is this story incomplete, or is there a part 2?

is this incomplete or there's more?

...sad...cold...yet suspensful. Resident Evil must be a strong point for you

...but this makes me want to write a love story, and a comedy-drama _

,,,Great...feminine bragging on an absent-minded bases.

See ya!