FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| demeter d 2008-05-21 ch 1,  | abuseGreetings! I just read one of your reviews on a Lindahoyland story, and followed it here. This is hilarious! Dobby behaves very much in character as the free employee he considers himself to be. And Snape's desperation is very believable. I especially liked McGonagall's response. She would not be messing around with them! Very nice! |
| RebeccaRoy 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful, the secret is out, the Brits start the day with coffee! LOLOLOLOLOl Mug bigger than his desk... |
| The Phantom of Quill and In... 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is the FUNNIEST harry potter story ever!! I loved this. love it love it love it love it! I was laughing all through it, i am even laughing now! I was rollong around laughing!! I loved the part with Lupin in it, well he is my fav character after all!! You keep writing, you are really funny! |
| Les Dowich 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseOh yeah! Now this I can relate to! Anyone who screws with anyone's head before coffee deserves to be hung drawn and quartered, never mind punched in thenose. Well done, funny and oh god, so true! |
| Still-Fantasy 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuse*flames* Hehe. Good story. Poor Lupin though, wonder how he ended up getting his coffee... |
| Watch Out for Yellow Moon 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abuseOkay, this is really funny and there are definately some very good lines. But at the beginning it says that Dobby and Snape were argueing for two hours and then it says 'one hour earlier'... I'm not really sure about the timeline. The dialogue doesn't give clues about them already argueing for an entire hour. Also, the line 'punching all the way' doesn't really fit in. Maybe something about Snape's fists flying would be better, even though it is kinda cliche. Good job overall. Great story! Peace, Yellow Moon P.S. I wouldn't have left such a long review if you hadn't said constructive critism welcome. Good luck with more stories! |
| MysticDragonstar 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI'm with Severus 100%! I can't get going with out my caffeine also!:D |