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Huzza! I was mentioned!

Anywho, I may not be religious, but I enjoyed the story. Sure, the ending was kinda obvious from the beginning, and at one point I figured out why Satan was trying to convince the girl about 2 paragraphs before she did, but it didn't really affect my enjoyment much. One thing did make me stop and wonder though, why would Satantake some time out of his day just to convince one person to go back to earth? I didn't think he was that desperate for souls, but then again what do I know about Satan?

About your new story ideas, I think that a story about one of those "dark gothic" topics is a great idea! Perhaps the main character attempts suicide, passes out, then gets advice from either their sub-conscious or, staying with this religion theme, an angel, and then a life lesson is learned? whatever your story is, good luck with it.

Once again, you have produced an interesting story. I think I'm becoming a fan of yours, chibi-girl, and don't worry about the size, the best stories are not always the longest.