:O ! BEN YOU ... YOU ... YOU ASS ! what a jerk ! aw poor sadie . update soon !

this is a very well written story, update is all I can think to say

oh my i love it please please write the second chapter

It is okay but I think that you could add some more to it. I will be watching for more! Plus it really left me hanging.

I like it but i think that you made ben a little out of character. I dont think that he would kiss heidi or think that her lips were lucious

Heidi sounds like Arden (wants to throw up)

great start. I wonder what she will do

Girl FIGHT! :D

update (whenever)

i like it! update it soon! and make the chapters longer! lol. maybe you could put the next chapter in sadie's POV. or at least thats what i would do... like make it her walking into the gym and seeing them kiss... just an idea! lol. update soon. :-)

update plz