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Heeheehee...great fic.

"deer in the headlights" thats great lol I loved it it was a hoot

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Aargh! TOO adorable! I also love the way your writing delivers the (pretty funny) jokes without descending into incoherency, as most humor fics are wont to do. This rocks!

lol! the bit with the diary was especially silly...

yay! i liked it: short, funny, and full of yummy shinobu and mitsuru goodness. i could just see shinobu sitting there slightly smirking as he plotted obscure tortures for the hapless mitsuru. i think you captured both the mood of greenwood and the characters very well. please write some more!

LOL! Hoshiko-san, I love your sense of humour...