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| BertieBottsBeans 2008-01-28 ch 1,  | abuseWell done . . . the one thing that bothered me was that Harry was so heartless; I can understand his hatred for Draco (I suppose . . . :D), but how could he be so very unfeeling towards his best friend? Anyway, it was excellently written; I really enjoyed it. |
| ilo3645 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abusei really liked your story it was very concise |
| 0Devilis0 2007-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved it! But it was sad,a tradgic beggining,quite almost origional. I love your stories^^ |
| Lotte and Ella 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI hate Harry right now. I seriously do. He's SO rash. I hate him. Maybe not. Ok, I don't. Exept in this story. Which, BTW, is very well written. Roxxi |
| FUZZZZZZZZZZZZZY 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abusehmm sad |
| EriYukiAyumi 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really awsome story. This didn't really confuse me at all. I don't normally like storys that don't have a strong backstory,but it just suits this one. The one thing that could improve this is to show a little more after Draco was killed,like, did anyone ever beleive Hermione? Did Harry Feel guilty about killing Draco at all? Did Hermione even get anyone to listen to her side of the story? Otherwise,this was a good story. |
| slytherin shadow 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is so different from your other fics! This one is so depressing. I almost cried! It was soo sad and good. I didnt expect him to die! Poor Draco. The hott ones always die! Thats not fair! |
| Marmalade Fever 2007-01-17 ch 1, | abuseHmm, this was pretty good. I liked how you never specifically said who was whom, so that was cool. One little thing bugged me, and that was that you wrote "Ronald" but not Frederick or Charles. So they were married? Hmm. That's intriguing. This is one of those stories with a backstory that you just aren't going to find out. I know a lot of people don't like that sort of thing, but I do. :) |
| tootsieXpopXdiscovery 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuseAW! That was great! Very Sad! Wonderful story! You are an awesome writer! Great job! :D ~tootsieXpopXdiscovery |
| dreamingstar213 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abusei like it. i cant think of anything you'd have to do to improve it, its good just like it is. |
| Lauren 2007-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abusewow. that was intense. and u USED MY BIRTHDAYAS AS THE DATE THE GUY DIED. WOW. THANKS A LOT. |
| Anime's Girl 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! So amazing! I hate you...you write good. |
| Zarroc 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abusegreat story, the ending made me a little confused though... "Draco Malfoy is survived by his wife, Hermione Malfoy." so, i understand the part about her being his wife, its the part about her 'surviving him' ... are you saying he's living on in her heart? hm.. do you mind clearing that up for me? but other than that, i quite enjoyed it... -Zarroc- |
| idonrlycarenemore 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuse“Let them find me. Nothing else matters to me anymore. Only you.” That sentence is just a teeny bit cliched, and there is one major literary error. 1) It would be the 1997 (or 98, depending on how you look at it) when Draco died. Another question I simply have to pose: 2) If Draco and Hermione were married, why would Harry kill Draco? Wouldn't he trust his best friend? And one more thing: 1) Harry Potter is really not all that mean. But it is sweet. If a bit dialogue-y. Peaches, Anya |
| rupertsgirlie 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abusewow idk how i feel about this i like it. but it stuns me. good job -tricia |