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Reviews For: Felix’s Perspective

Psycho Tangerine
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abuseI assume this is connected to another story you wrote because I don't know why Felix's father would be there or why Cruger would be mad at him. But this is well written.
Fowler Birdie
2007-03-09
ch 1,
abuseHey bro, nice work. It kind of reminds me of myself. It's a great story, keep going.
Swan Shiratori
2007-02-20
ch 1,
abuseI agree, well done Wolfie.
four-eyed vulpine
2007-02-03
ch 1,
abuseSure, he only appears for like two minutes in an episode, but it's about time we had a Felix story! Honestly, I've never really thought of a Felix/Kat pairing before, but I think it would really work--that is, if Doggie just starting hating Kat and breaks up with her, which will NEVER happen. :P This is a short and sweet piece of work.

There is one thing I want to mention, and that is the use of details. Maybe including some more descriptive things like details about room, the cadet, the fight, etc., so the reader can create a better visual image of what is happening. However, don't go overboard with the detail, or it will take away from the main plot and become a severe case of TMI. XD

I hope you continue on this, because I think it's a really neat idea.
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