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| Psycho Tangerine 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI assume this is connected to another story you wrote because I don't know why Felix's father would be there or why Cruger would be mad at him. But this is well written. |
| Fowler Birdie 2007-03-09 ch 1, | abuseHey bro, nice work. It kind of reminds me of myself. It's a great story, keep going. |
| Swan Shiratori 2007-02-20 ch 1, | abuseI agree, well done Wolfie. |
| four-eyed vulpine 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseSure, he only appears for like two minutes in an episode, but it's about time we had a Felix story! Honestly, I've never really thought of a Felix/Kat pairing before, but I think it would really work--that is, if Doggie just starting hating Kat and breaks up with her, which will NEVER happen. :P This is a short and sweet piece of work. There is one thing I want to mention, and that is the use of details. Maybe including some more descriptive things like details about room, the cadet, the fight, etc., so the reader can create a better visual image of what is happening. However, don't go overboard with the detail, or it will take away from the main plot and become a severe case of TMI. XD I hope you continue on this, because I think it's a really neat idea. |