I read your story a bit a while ago, found it again and decided to pop and take another look. In general it's quite well-written, you have a good style and you write action scenes well. And it's an Aeris/Tifa pairing. I'm partial to Cloud myself but AxT is also a pairing I've found some good stories for. I'm reviewing chapter 24, because to be honest it got hard to follow, keeping track of who was aligned with who and such. But for the sheer length and the work you've obviously put into it, congratulations. While I didn't make it to the end, what I did read was excellent.

- Drake

Ah Wall Market, so many amusing memories from the original game. Too bad this time nothing's amusing. I wonder how bad things are gonna be next chapter D:

Fucking yay Dolls! I think that's Juni, is it? D: Or one of the others, I can hardly remember which is which now. XD I like that 'power of chaos is more fucking powerful than Jenova's mitochondria' bit. Teehee. Nice work!

Gast isn't dead?! D: More shit hits the fan! I really like how you've explained that little bit about Raven and the Materia. Wha- sounds like Agent 47 just weaseled in for a cameo xD.

Oho shit D:. This could be bad for Tifa! DX don't die omg.

D8 Whoa, shit just hit the fan.

Aw! Tifa D:! I really like how you're piecing the POV bits together =D!

Oho, tis getting a tad confusing here o__o! Poor Lucrecia, I really wanna give her a hug :(

A change of perspective! Nice move there Adam. Go Tifa go, you save Lucrecia's ass D8

D8

HOLY SHIT.

THIS IS AWESOME. MOAR PLZ! D8

EPICLY WRITTEN CHAPTER OH GOD SETH DON'T BE A SCREW UP.

“Aeris, if you weren’t capable of strangling me with my own intestines, I’d slap you.”

That is a great line XD. And you put my name in it~

XD! Ostrich! That's bloody brilliant that~. Yuffie is as hilarious as always, gosh, here's hoping for her appearing more often. O Icicle inn D: That means that we find out moar about Aeris' family! Oh noes D8

“Is anyone hurt?” Rufus asked.

Yuffie was picking glass shards out of her arm.

“I’m fine,” she said.

XD That made me laugh. GO TUFF YUFF. Wow, that was an action packed chase, reminded me of that bit in FF7 right after you escape the Shin-Ra building, but much more RAWR and GUNS and BANG XD;

D: So glad you updated! I was worried you weren't gonna... but yay! That was certainly an interesting turn of events. SHadaloo rebelled? For the FUCKIN WIN. Aeris/Juli looking EVEN MOAR LIKELY >8D Oh gosh update soon again plz and kick Seth in~

D< OK KILL REEVE AND KILL HIM DEAD. Fucking hell I hope Beatrix rips his damn head off and shoves it up his ass. Bastard.