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Reviews for: Of Black Steel and Red Gems
Goshikku Seirei
2008-08-09 . chapter 2
Yay! I loved it! The fifty sentences are fabulous! I love RinxArcher!! XD
Tracy
2008-04-28 . chapter 2
I always feel like crying when i read 50 lines!
ShiroNeko316
2007-11-29 . chapter 2
these were very interesting, i wish you could write some one-shots on these sentenses you have a lot of good ideas here.
Amanda
2007-10-10 . chapter 2
Wow, this is really fantastic!! I love Rin and Archer! Its so cruel that Archer had to die =( Please do keep these fics coming! =)
Devil's Angel 92
2007-09-26 . chapter 2
Whoa... that was so sweet! God, why did Archer have to die?
Aireonna
2007-09-13 . chapter 2
These made me want to cry. Tightened the back of my throat and everything. And each one could be its own story...and this is where I beg you to write them. PLEASE write more. I beg of you.
Crazylobo
2007-08-30 . chapter 2
You, my friend, are a fine writer!

Those were some brilliant sentences! I love the witty comedy, sizzling romance, dirty innuendo, and some plain "aww, that's so sweet!" quotes that you have included in here, as well as the titles themselves. Heh heh, yes, Team Red and Black rocks.

This one deserves special mention in particular:
"19 – Soul
If his soul is cool steel, Rin’s is a burning flame; Archer knows it takes both to make a fine blade." -twitches- The idea of them having babies scare me though. o_O

This has gone under my Story Alerts and Favorites List. I indeed hope you write more for this.

~Crazylobo
Anon.
2007-08-22 . chapter 2
This is nice. I love one sentence stuff like this. You should write more.
Niie-Niie
2007-07-29 . chapter 2
Cute!I like it so much!>_< Especially about 'King','Child' and 'Ghost'!

Great job!If only you can add it until 100 sentences!How about that? ^^

Anyway,great job and write more please!
Elltara
2007-06-22 . chapter 1
Realy love it)
я бы столько пунктиков не нашла))
Lawlz
2007-04-29 . chapter 2
Amazing 50 sentences. Who knew that one sentence could be powerful?

Added this to my favorites. :]
glowie
2007-04-20 . chapter 2
Wow. you are good. please continue writing. thanks.
Aiwethryne
2007-03-30 . chapter 2
For both chapters... ... ...Wow. (nods slowly)...Interesting... To think that Archer is older Shirou...
Ms.Archer
2007-02-12 . chapter 1
Wow. Just wow. I LOVED number 12, 23, adn 49. Will you do a Sakura x Rider? That would be great!
Hoshi no Megami
2007-01-23 . chapter 1
Wow, this was really hot. There just isn't enough Archer/Rin sutff out there, so you're really filling a void. I hope you write more soon!
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