Well, that was a fun story. House was rather warm and fuzzy throughout, but he was still okay. Awesome that Addison has a toy monster truck!! A pretty House present - living with House, Addie is going to have some interesting tastes. A fairly well-written fic and enjoyable. Good job!

That was cool the way House handed Addie to Wilson because he knew he was going to have a seizure. I like Cameron in this fic - she might be a little bit more weepy than usual, but she does get upset. That's her character. And I liked House's characterization on his 'truth conversation' with her.

Argh!! Pretty good cliffhanger! Good writing - sheesh, this disease is moving darn fast, whatever it is! Cameron's crying should be more noticeable - good call there.

I love how Cameron cried about everything - actually, that was pretty good characterization. Wilson was done pretty well too,
what with his getting upset and all. I also liked the way House complained about he should be in on the differential (and
he should!) when Cameron and Foreman came in. Pretty good chapter.

Okay, House is getting sick on top of a baby!? Great. This was a pretty good chapter - I liked the little 'Wilson voice' in House's mind. Cute. I'm glad Addison didn't wake up and I'm very curious to see the next chapter!!

Hee hee. Good luck taking Addie to the hospital. Sorry it's taken me a while to get back to this. This'll be the only chapter I read today, too so I'm sorry but you'll only get the one review. I liked the chapter and Stacy's letter. But like I said, good luck taking Addie to the hospital... House.

Okay chapter - pretty good. I liked the mention of the 'duck fetish' - that was cute. And the mention of good lungs. A doctor-oriented comment if I ever saw one. I'm beginning to get a little annoyed with the whole House-being-mushy-I'm-not-going-to-let-her-change-my-life-but-he's-being-mushy-anyway sort of thing - it really is out of character. But you said House was gonna a be kind of warm and fuzzy, so I'll just take it as it comes. And the writing itself is good. Anyway, I'd very much like to see what the letter says, but I think that I've been online long enough and it's really pretty out, so I'll read the next chapter later.

Of course House can take control! He controls him team and everything, and he always manages to fight with Cuddy. House is kind of warm and fuzzy, but it's okay. It's pretty cute, really. It was pretty out of character when they were all fighting - "He'll drop her on her head. "I WILL NOT!" "HELLO, YOU TWO! I can take care of my own baby without Wilson spending the night!" - but it was insufferably funny! Good writing, this is a fun and cute story. The part about Stacy is sad, but other than that this is pure fun. And Addison is adorable.

I love this story! We need a sequel.

Yeah, this chapter was okay. I'm surprised that House apologized to Cameron after yelling at her, but maybe that was just so she'd do the test and not tell anyone. Her comment about House having someone to love him was in great character, but House smiling back at her after that comment seems rather unlikely. I was also surprised that House said 'please' to Wilson to get him to take care of Addie, but I guess he was desperate. Other than those, the characterization was pretty good. I liked the motorcycle issue and the reactions of House and Wilson, especially the way Wilson kind of freaked out (you can't take a baby on a motorcyle!) and them trying to feed Addie and stuff back at House's place. That was hilarious. And what the heck is Cuddy doing!?

Yeah, who is that? Good cliffhanger. And who doesn't like the movie Saw? I've never seen it, but from what I've heard, it sounds absolutely horrifying, creepy, and disgusting! I hate stuff like that! There's my opinion. Pretty good characterization - it's definitely improved since the first chapter. The part about the period was quite amusing, if a little odd. Addie hasn't said much yet. She's not even one, so I guess she probably doesn't really talk. But I'd love to hear it when she finally does!

Oh, dear. This is a bit of a mess. The characterization was pretty good on this chapter, although I have trouble imagining Stacy saying that Mark wasn't very bright. The writing is good, as usual. I liked Wilson watching from the balcony and wondering what the heck was happening.

aw, that was cute...

Hmm. Interesting twist. This will be peculiar. I'm surprised House just sort of tamely accepted 'I'm forgiving you' and didn't get mad at her for saying that, but that's about the only character flaw I observed in this chapter. The writing is still good and the interposing of the song was interesting.

Okay, the characterization does seem a little off here. I'm not sure - I could see House saying 'Thank you' but I was a little surprised that he said 'you really helped me.' The fight was rather abrupt, although you were trying to portray that something was eating at House. The yelling just seemed a little strange, that and the odd psychological talk. But your description is very nice (although Wilson doesn't have blond hair?) and the writing itself is decent.