An interesting idea to say the least, I'd like see where you go with this one. A thought hit me is that, if that's what Kazumi and Chizuru are like, then what are Ayaka and Haruna like!

good story please hurry up with the next chapter

Akira-nii:Mana's shot up a UN meeting?
Hojo-Itoko:-looking scared- Konoka-chan's a pyromaniac?!
Yukai-san:Nodoka-chan is the MISTRESS OF TERROR(thunderclap)?!
Me: -Holds up sign with "WIN" written on it-

AW GAWD! I LOVE THIS KRAP!! PLEASE! CONTINUE!

the main review

Chizuru being pedophile is really normal on this story, but its truly, truly scary, I'd expect more of this insane hilarity

Enchaos Ivan

shocking... oh my... but heck its funny!

I'm sorry, but this is just not funny. It's never funny to mock the insane. It's never funny to put characters out of character. It's never funny to rape canon. It would have been better to have the mentally insane people be characters outside the academy.

This story is freaking HILARIOUS!

Whoa! I didn't Chizuru was like that! ...When will Evangeline make an appearance? And Chachamaru too!

So, a new chapter is here. Man, you made Chizuru pretty damn scary, not to mention Kazumi. Nodoka, are you setting her up next in the chapter to come?

for some reasons this story reminds me of "the cradle" in Thief 3... ah well I digressed.

So far the story is a very refreshing experience. The idea of Nekane (the ideal caring sister-figure) getting drunk and Nodoka being the mistress of terror just keeps me reading. Well done for getting me addicted to the story :p

Konoka being obsessed with fire is a total surprise for me. Just imagining Konoka happily flamethrowing makes me laugh and creep at the same time. Chizuru being the mistress of pain is also surprising and fun, so different from her motherly role in negima.

The only thing I am worrying about is Asuna pairing up with Negi again. I just worried that Asuna's interaction with Negi might be too similar to that in manga. It might be a bit cliche to have Asuna living with Negi again. And obviously Asuna is suffering from over-violentness. Same thing with Kazumi and Mana as well. Their symptoms of craziness are not really surprising. Maybe it's b/c I read too much love hina and negima!?

Finally, I was wondering what put Setsuna into this asylum. She looks very sane to me (girl-girl relationship is perfectly okay so I don't think that's the reason). lol that's yet another thing to keep me hoping for the next chapters.

ach, sorry i feel too lazy to log in. But I did feel so happy when you updated. And will Yue or Kaede be appearing soon?

You know, if Chizuru is acting like this, I would've thought she would've been in the mad house. Still, nice chapter :)

Hm, I wouldn't have pegged Konoka for a pyromaniac, but still, nice chapter. Are there going to be any relationships? And also, it's Secchan, not Setchan.

Very interesting idea, this Mahora for the mad. Nicely done so far, though :)

Oh, this is gold. This would have to be the true side a Mahora if anything else. The series is full of loonies anyway...

I say onwards with this one...