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chili-peppers
2007-01-27
ch 4,
abuseOh wow! this fic is awesome!! Loved the ending! great job!
wjobsessed
2007-01-17
ch 3,
abuseWhat a good chapter.
What a great ending to this chapter!
What a great story.
On to ch. 4...
mabelreid
2007-01-16
ch 4,
abusenot sure how i missed this one, I love it, Danny can come sit through a snowstrom with me any time he wants.
lolosuper
2007-01-16
ch 4,
abuseAwesome story! Great job!
rhrforever
2007-01-16
ch 4,
abuseAwesome ending.
Dantana4ever
2007-01-16
ch 4,
abuseSequel please! that would be greatly appreciated!! i just love it!!
Lily Rosalia
2007-01-16
ch 4, anon.
abuseHey! I still love it! You just seems te get better and better! Please go on... I'm sure I'm not the only one that loves this story!
Love Lily
danielle
2007-01-16
ch 4, anon.
abuseThat was a great chapter.
The Little Corinthian
2007-01-15
ch 3,
abuseYEAH! Oh, FINALLY! :0P Yay! Very nice job, VERY much looking forward to more!
Orphelia-Rose
2007-01-15
ch 3,
abuse::squeals:: How Perfect!!
I love it!! What a great chapter...so well done.
You had me scared for a good minute..when she yelled at him that she didn't want to be friends..and then I scrolled down.lol.
I love getting a new chapter everyday..THANKS!
Great job...keep it up!
~@}-,-`-
rhrforever
2007-01-15
ch 3,
abuseOHMYGOD! You are an AMAZING writer! More please! I love this so much!
SallyJetson
2007-01-15
ch 3,
abuseI *love* that Lindsay laid it out on the table without anymore running! And I love this...

QUOTE- “I, it’s not that I don’t want to be friends but… I don’t trust myself to leave it at that.”

And the ending...

QUOTE- “As he pulled away slowly, Lindsay let out a breath she didn’t know she had been holding, opening her eyes to find his own staring back at her, only inches between them.

Quietly emotional, sweet and touching! I hope there is more! SJ
fatkat
2007-01-15
ch 3,
abuseOMG - this is so good. Just found it and thankfully so! The emotions feel so real. I love the whole concept and can't wait for more!
ReJo
2007-01-15
ch 3,
abuseOh, yeah. This is some good stuff.
Lily Rosalia
2007-01-14
ch 3, anon.
abuseO my... I don't know what to say! I think your writing is brilliant! Please don't stop here, it's too good!
Love Lily
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