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| LL 2007-03-20 ch 1, | abuseYou know, this is pretty good writing. It's entertaining and just the right length, without being mushy. :) |
| happyhooligan2001 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseChloe's always had a strong sense of duty. At this point in her life it hadn't quite shifted to Jack as much as in later seasons. The Chloe of later seasons would have probably covered it up and tried to get Jack some help. |
| angeliena 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseohoh So nice!! please more!! |