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| Corn Cob Xov 2008-02-09 ch 14, | abuseKawaii and confusing kinda. (manga and anime are compltely diffent. what's with that?) Well, I like the boot part. Edward Elric: The man who fed a boot to the emporor(?sp)... Nice fic SexySpoonsWillRuleUsAll. |
| Dark Reborn 2008-01-28 ch 14, | abuseThank you writing this story! It's a good story! ^_^ |
| Ai no Miko500 2007-12-15 ch 14, | abuse:) What a cool story. I'm just getting into YnM so I decided to read this fic [I remembered you wrote a crossover while watching episode 3] I really like so many parts. I was a bit iffy at Ch13 because it all was pretty quick that chapter, but I like the light humor and plot. How you combined the manga & anime was really cool. I also like the fact that the potion was basicly milk [XD'] & Ed asking about anime in heaven[he never did finish it did he? @.@ well, here's hoping heaven does get anime. And manga too!] So yeah, very nice. :) You get a mystery Christmas gift! [btw-this story made me want to hear "Defying Gravity" o.O weird train of thoughts ne?] |
| Keeper of the Times 2007-07-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read this story a while back and didn't understand at all what was going on. Now that I've read Descendants of Darkness, I know! (Side note: Tsusuki was 26 when he died not 25) Otherwise the stories really good! |
| Daemonchan 2007-07-06 ch 5, | abuseI'm very confused. In Ch. 2 Kanoe tells Ed his records begin in 1921 and end about 1924. That would have put Ed in Europe for WWI, not WWII with the Nazis. WWII begin in 1939 after the Nazis invaded Poland. In this chapter, you say that Ed feels he could have prevented the deaths that occured. Your dates are off by almost 20 years. He couldn't have stopped a war that happened 20 years after he disappeared. Did you mean that he had gone back through the Gate in 1924 and they reemerged in about 1939? I like the premise of your story but the dating and lack of research makes it hard to enjoy. |
| kyothefallenkit 2007-07-02 ch 14, | abuseAw, but they are going to be together no matter what right? |
| silver candle 2007-06-14 ch 14, | abuseThis was a really awesome story. I can't wait to read your next one! |
| Yuna's Aeon 2007-06-14 ch 14, | abuseYou mean it's over? Really, really over? Aw... Great job on this story! I really liked it! And yay! My name was on the list and I got cake! Awesome! Good luck on your other stories! |
| indigo's ocean 2007-06-14 ch 14, | abuse-is suffocated by the cake shoved in her face- THAT WAS A SERIOUSLY AMAZINGLY WONDERFULLY LOVELY ENDING! -cries- Wow, I'm such a sap. -giggle- ANYWAY, this chapter was cute. Although, where's Ed's tattoo? And did you ever explain exactly why he left from the Gate? Sorry, either I'm too sleepy or too hyped up on motrin or whatever, but I kind of didn't get that. -bows- -apologizes- Anyway, are you glad it's finished? I thought it was so cute that Hisoka confessed his love for Tsuzuki and I was seriously going "Aaw..." And then when Envy kissed Ed, once again I was going "Aw..." And don't you think it would be cool to get an ouroboros tattoo? I would totally get one on my back, you know? Okay, I'm stopping now, and I better get off before my mom catches me. -sigh- Anyway, nice work! ~indigo |
| h.l.stealth 2007-06-14 ch 14, | abuseYay! Cake! And fluffy endings! Maybe... fluffy cake? I think I got confused somewhere in there but it's ENVY! and ED! And... whatever the other guys' names are. Don't remember... Loved the ending, loved the story, want an autograph! That cake joke was bad... I'm so sorry. |
| hittocerebattosai 2007-06-13 ch 14, | abuseAck--silverbrumbly123 is here too? ne. ^^ Thank you for writing this! ^^ luff! ^^ |
| hittocerebattosai 2007-06-13 ch 13, | abuseAah! Update soon?? pretty pretty please?? *puppy eyes* Pretty plesae?? *huggles Edo* |
| indigo's ocean 2007-06-11 ch 13, | abuseLike, oh em gee. Haha. I finally finished the whole Yami no Matsuei anime and I think they were really hurried during the last few parts of the Kyoto arc, because not everything added up and then it just ended. But it was great. Tsuzuki is now my official hero forever and ever. I love him. Okay, moving on... This chapter was a whole heck of a lot better than your others. In my honest opinion, haha. Um. I'm trying to think of things to say... I loved the TsuzukixHisoka fluff in this chapter, and your description has honestly improved. A lot. It shows, especially in the beginning with the wires and the music and Ed. But I really want to find out about that whole "Envy killing Ed and inking his name on his flesh". I'm assuming that will be worked out next chapter. And I bet that the writing on Envy's thigh says "Hagane no." Or something like that. And I'm assuming THAT will be explained next chapter too. And, now I understand a lot more about this story... So you continued it from after the anime ended? -nods wisely- Haha. I feel all smart because it's the first anime series I've actually finished. Okay. That was totally off topic... -thinks- I know there was something else... Oh yeah. The artificial human thing. That never really got explained in the Yami no Matsuei anime so I'm looking forward to see what's going to be explained next chapter. How many new fans have you made for YnM? I bet there's more, besides me... hehe Anyway, thanks for reviewing my stories, I'm glad you liked them. ^^ ~indigo |
| Sir Gawain of Camelot 2007-06-10 ch 13, | abuseMutant... tapeworms? O_o Aww, the fluff, the fluff! *skips in circles* All the loverly fluff! Fluff with Hisoka and Tsuzuki, fluff with Envy and Ed, fluff with Muraki and Death! Or.. maybe the last one isn't fluff. Hehheh. But aw! When the curse was gone, and Hisoka threw his arms around Tsuzuki. That was just too cute. ^^ And rather in character. Really, Ed telling Envy he loves his right after a near-death experience is perfectly understandable. I mean, one wants to make sure that the other person knows for sure, right? xD And we find the source of that strange tatoo of Ed's. xD How will things wrap up on Muraki's end? How will news of his death reach his fiancée and that friend of his that runs that restaurant? Will they get his body to bury it? O_o will Hisoka and Tsuzuki attend the funeral? What about Ed and Envy. I can't picture Envy wanting to go, but Ed would probably want to, if only to apologize to the people Muraki left behind. The people who were hurt by his death. Eh. I'm not sure about the Yami no Matsuei characters. They're harder to figure out. |
| Yuna's Aeon 2007-06-10 ch 13, | abuseOokay... Well that's that! Good chapter, even if it was a little rushed. But I like dht eending though! Until your next chapter! |