This is really good so far :)

I love how you put it in script format, like it would be in the show! That's something new. Anyways, I love it so far and I'm definitely going to read more :D

Pleas write more...it's just getting good...

I like this. This is starting out quite interestingly. Like Scully, I do not trust Victoria. I hope ths does not end up a Sc/Sk romance. I am personally biases towards MSR. Even if it does become one, I still look forward to reading the rest of your 'fic. BTW the script style format works for me. Thank-you -Igor-

Great! (Not very big on detailed comments...lol)

Great story, can't wait for the rest

Okay, I'm not too sure, but you are going to upload a third part, right? That was so good so far! I'm starting to write an X Files fic, so I thought I'd check some on the first new page out. The first ones sucked, and by the summer I thought yours would be crappy, but it's so good! Finally, out of all the nerds and weirdos (not saying that's bad, that would be hypocritical) we've actually got a *good* writer! You were great with script format, too!

Much applause!

Yah!

-Sophia Mooney

(yer goin' on my favorite stories!)