I heard about this on and was very excited about it. I am intrigued so far. Never thought of Florence as a redhead before, not that that's a critcism, it's very original.
Would love to see many more chapters, especially one about Florence's rather unfortunate haircut that we see in the show. (London Stage Version, just a humble suggestion). Haven't ever thought of Freddie as blond either, but both of these are minor details. 1 tiny ConCrit though: Keep Florence's crisp Britishness
consistant, try to avoid Americanisms like "barf" etc. That was the only flaw. On the whole it was simply spiffing.