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| Lucas McDrake 2008-05-27 ch 1,  | abuseThat was cool! I loved it. I don't exactly believe in love at first sight, though. I don't know how far in the game you are, but where I am (which is Draklor Laboritories), Balthier doesn't show any signs of falling in love (although, Ashe-Balthier is a good pairing. Defiant princess with leading man...that does sound awesome). Anyway, I liked it. I hope you continue your writing in this category! |
| BGwildRoze 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abuseAll I have to say is...AW! |
| m o o g l e d a i m e 2007-02-17 ch 1, | abuseThis made me squee. ^^ ♥ |
| Skitty 2004 2007-02-07 ch 1, | abuseit's taken me almost a month to review. Wow. I'm getting slow, aren't I? XD anyways... It has most definately changed from the version that you made me read in class. In a good way of course. XP I like the last line. It like... matches the title. XD yeeaah... Keep Writing! |
| Bright Lotus 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet. Didn't figure Balthier as an outdoor tracking type, but then again, he has many talents we know nothing about. |
| Sita 900 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abusethis was a cute one! |
| Maia's Pen 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseSo sweet! I enjoyed this! ^.^ I wish that could have REALLY happened in the game! hee hee. . . The inro was esp. nice.. great word selection. I loved the imagry. *swoons* yep... Balthier is so hot. Lucky Ashe! Write more! =) =) =) Maia |
| 123 2007-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abusenot bad :) some of you comparisons were a bit awkward, effortly isnt a word either. but it was still nice imagery. like to see more from you! |
| Sweet Valentine 2007-01-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is so cute! What a wonderful little story! |