wow... very dark, but this is good!

Author,

This was dark, but I don't mind dark that often. The only thing I had a problem with was your descriptions. They seemed forced, like the ending. Everything else was beautifully displayed.

Your fellow author,
CrimsonCrome

P.S.
New story: A Heart Renewed!

Sad but it made me feel better.Lately I've been depressed,this eleminated some stress.I hope you feel happier in the future.

Wow. That sure was depressing! Not really my type of story, I'm more of a humor/romance kinda person, but you are such a good writer that it's hard not to enjoy this! Great oneshot, you are an awesome authoress!! Keep up the good work! ^^