loved it update soon

part of me wonders if derek would ever really stop with one word, like the name of a boyfriend, when he's like this...part of me wants to say he would, but then...

anyway, good story!

this is so sad, it made me cry! this is so awesum

Nice twist!
Awesome oneshot.
Keep it up.
~Jo

hm...strange concept...yet believeable...cool

yeah i think it's because he cares about them too much and doesnt want to see them get hurt

Interesting.

I liked the way you described Derek in the beginning, and the references to breaking and vulnerability were excellent.

Intriguing concept in your AN-I don't really see it, sam/derek-and I normally enjoy slash, hell even threesome stories if well done can be fantastic(HP trio fic=love), but for some reason I just don't see any of that undercurrent between Sam and Derek. :shrugs: That doesn't really have anything to do with the quailty of your story- i just thought i'd throw my opinion out there.

Like i said, the story itself was really well written. I hope to see more LwD stuff from you. :-)

Uh . . . er . . . *blinks* Okay. Time for a review. This was very good. I like the beginning, all the animalistic references (Derek truly is an animal.) and such. And Casey's confession. And then . . . Derek's confession. It took me a few minutes to . . . grasp what he had said. I mean . . . yea. I suppose, with the way things were playing out, I didn't understand--didn't expect what he said. Now, I'm still not sure what exactly he meant--if it was platonic (I like to think that's what he meant.) or not, but does it matter? At least it ended up being a Dasey. Heh. Really, this was written very well (I think you can tell by now that I'm not flipping out anymore.), and the end was very fluffy. Keep up the good work.

~ Oasis

Your fic was very well-written, I'll give you that. It didn't come off as clichéd despite the fact that you just jumped straight into the Dasey sex scene. It was angsty without being wangsty. It was sappy, but not ridiculously so. At one point, I thought you were actually being realistic about confusion with sexual orientation.

Then your AN shattered that illusion. Did it ever occur to you that bisexuality is a complex situation? It's especially painful when you're in the early stages of discovering it in yourself, and it's always confusing when you like a guy and a girl at the same time. It doesn't make you a greedy sex-pig.

haha

that was actually really funny. i couldn't really take it seriously or anything, but it was entertaining. i iked your A?N at the end. it made me laugh even more. lol, derek IS selfish. ahahaha