this was so cutee I lke it write more stories like this one ^^

Awesomely sad! You did the mood of the story quite nicely. I felt a bit sad for a moment.

Aw. i really liked this story. is there gonna be more?

We! So cute! So cute ... yet so sad ... hmm ...

*Runs off to read all the other stories you have up*

~kittiKat