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Periboea
2007-08-20
ch 2,
abuse“'Equestrian,' you lummox!” LOL! I could not stop laughing for a bit there. Yet another excellent installment, and I hope that you continue. I've nothing to scrutinize in anything! Excellent, excellent, and even more surprising . . . excellent. Keep it up.

-Sorry about oozing compliments._.-
Periboea
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abuseThe first chapter was eloquently delivered and all were superbly in character. Your grammar is another mark of excellency. Very, very good chapter. I'm going to watch you!_!
El Varon
2007-03-05
ch 2,
abuseGreat chapter. Seems to me things just went from bad to worse.
Tammy
2007-03-04
ch 2, anon.
abuseI loved Sophie's comment about dinner possibly being edibe and her exchange with Lenora. It was also interesting to see how Rogue was effected when she absorbed her. Will they be able to make it through this adventure without changing the history of the place? Seems like it's going to be quite a challenge. Gambit's concern over Rogue was very sweet as were his last words to her through the mind link. Write more soon.
Amakusa
2007-03-04
ch 2,
abuseHm... y'know, I really do love these eternity series and I'm glad I finally got a chance to actually put that in one of the reviews. I can't wait to see more updates!

Bye for now!
RoguefanAM
2007-03-04
ch 2,
abuseWonderful chapter, as always. Dialogue was top-notch as usual, especially this bit =

'She spent the ride talking to her most sensible companion: the horse.’

That bit had me rolling on the floor with laughter. I really mean it; your work is EXTREMELY good. Why you aren’t writing one of the current X-books, I don’t know, but you should be. :)

I’m warming up to Wolfsbane, who I never really liked. She’s a funny one, I hope to she more of her and Jamie’s interactions in the future.

I also hope the next update sooner, the update wait felt like an ETERNITY! :(

…But that’s only because I really like your work. No LOVE your work.

Anyway, I can't wait to see what Rogue and the others are going to do with Mystique.

Until the next update then, bye! ^_^
Darlin
2007-01-29
ch 1,
abuseWhoo hoo! Guido! I love him. It's good to have you back, good to be getting caught up too!
Jean1
2007-01-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseSorry I missed this one when it came out. My favorite group of all the ones being written about but I enjoy te wy you've integrated all this time travel stories into a whole concept and give us the story then the characters issues to fill it out.
El Varon
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseI'm happy to see that you're back!! Excellent beginning to a new story.
BlueSqueak
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseGlad to see you are back. Great story. Can't wait for more
kiragecko
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseYou're back! My joy knows no bounds.

kiragecko
xoXOCutieOXox
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseYAY! You updated! I'm so excited! Thanks for the reply to my message and I hope you're getting all settled in at your new place. I'm excited to see what happens next for Rogue and how she deals with everything. Once again...thanks for the great read!! You rock!
Tammy
2007-01-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis looks like it's going to be just as exciting as the first story. I loved Rogue's conversations with Cecilia, especially when she told her to call her Anna. It'll be interesting to see what happens with Paige too. How will she deal with the loss of Warren and Jono? Will she get at least one of them back to normal at the end of all this? I'm also looking forward to seeing Guillaume again. He was a great character, and I wonder if he'll be able to help Rogue somehow.
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