your story is marvelous..i love your story!! ^_^
keep on writing..

I love your story!! You should make a sequel!!

Nice story.

I like the way this story is going, but I think the best fanfics move the plot forward in unexpected ways while keeping the charas in character, which is the hardest part. I admit I have yet to read through the whole story yet, but in this chapter and chapter 5, I'm going "no way would he do that."
Otherwise, nice job, I love the Kyoya-Haruhi pairings~

AWW.:) So sweet...:D

Yoshio Ootori was a bit OOC here, but this is a very nice story.:) Love it! ;)

Very very cute story! I enjoyed it a lot! Thank you for writing this ^^

This fanfic was well-done. It was interesting and explored most points of view. It seemed like a good "prologue" so I'm gonna read the next chapter (I'm only on the first chapter)

Perfect ending made me go aw.

this was good.

Okay I have a few grips. One Kyouya did not suffer enough. The host club did not bring them back together. The mission of the host club is bring joy to all ladies. Otherwise it was a good story.

I loved it! very cute! write more sometime soon!

awsome!! this story kicks butt!! YEA! i luv luv luv it!! i think u shud write a sequel!! and if i seem hyper 2 u thats becuz i am ultamitly happy!! XD becuz my friend's parents just convinced my other friend's parens to let her go 2 AnimeIowa with us!!YAY!!... sorry... just had 2 get that out... ^^ awsome story... WRITE A SEQUEL!!

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It's cute so far... and sushi sounds so good right now. :[

I love your work, you know.

I just wanted to point out that Haruhi could never in a million years be a size 8. At 5ft tall and the way she looks, she's practically a 1.

I know dress sizes run differently than regular ones, but I thought I should point it out. A girl in one of my classes at school actually made her own prom dress, but it turned out that it was too big and she actually needed a size 3--and I was just thinking that SHE was a little curvier and weighed slightly more than Haruhi would (granted, at about 5'4", this girl is around 105 pounds).

I like reading stories about Kyouya, though. Your writing is pleasant. I have really bad ADD and sometimes have trouble reading things that have too many mistakes in them, so this is wonderful for me.