Beautiful.

Really interesting internal dialog. We all know Orihime faced these thoughts upon their return from the Seireitei, but to see them presented so nicely is wonderful.

this is cute. keep going =)

*stares* *stares some more* *stares even more* That last part...it changed the whole fic and left my jaw hanging. I loved it! =) And I'm not even a IchiHime shipper XD Write more Bleach, I would really like to read it.

And come online sometime, will ya? ^_^

I really like it, and i think you should do a second installment :P

GreaT wOrK I likE iT wriTe mOre ^^

The summary does not do this story justice. It was great to read and I feel like Orihime sadness at her inability came out well. The only thing that irks me is the honorifics and the names, such as Uryuu instead of Ishida. But that's just me who's been reading bleach manga too many times, XD

cool! I like your story