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piperspeanut
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseOK you made me cry on this one shame on you...lol no it was good
dreamgirl93
2007-03-20
ch 1,
abuseomg, it was so sad. I bawled my eyes out, poor Chris!
kk1189
2007-02-09
ch 1,
abusewow that was intense! i cried!
smudgeworthy
2007-01-21
ch 1,
abuseI don't really know what to say (I'm not in a very word-y mood).
This was so sad! It made me wanna cry. Poor Chris, I could just imagine him with Piper's dead body ...
Anyway -
Great little one-shot! It was written really well. I love the way you write Chris. And you seem to write him differently in all your stories, which is really good. It makes things more interesting.
Good job with this! You wrote it really well!!
Joralie
2007-01-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseOMG!It'S so sad!I'm crying!poor chris!omg!good story!
SunshineDaisies816
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuseOK, that was really sad. :-( But good, in a way.
Witty-Kate
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseaw that was so sad! poor chris!
forestwife
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abusethis was amazingly well-written. It was very very sad, but then you did warn me, so I guess can't complain!
anyway, yeah, brilliant but depressing.
Melinda Wyatt Charmed
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseOMG! I can't stop crying.. It was, ineed, much depressing.. I love the end where nothing mattered to Chris anymore.. just because Piper didn't hug him back.. cause his mother was dead :'(
Amantine
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseOh God, oh God, oh God... This was so sad. I'm crying here! Oh, poor Chris...

Awesome portrail of his emotions and of the scene itself. You rock!

-Amantine-
CharmedOneForever
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseSo sad! I actually had tears in my eyes! Very good though, I loved it!
History Buff 1990
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseOh that was so sad, I really must have a way to contact the people that make you do exams and put a stop to this torture, it was so sad to read.

I do hope the updates for 'A Different Ending' and 'Second Chances' are nicer and more happyish, so I wouldn't mind at all if you skipped the updates for this week. If only to get you out of the horrid morbid type of mood you seam to be in, and are able to write more uplifting fiction. As you know, I'm doing exams as well and when that happens I'm also in a volitile(sp?) mood but I prefer more pleasent nearly-fluffy stories (thats how out-of-it I get), so this isn't helping.

But at the same time it was a pretty interesting take on piper's death so well done, write more soon (preferrably after wednesday after how sad this one turned out, no offence).

P.S. Good luck next week.
Plutobaby494
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuse*siffles* That was so sad!! You expressed Chris's emotion really well, it almost was like I was the one feeling it, kinda! Lol, sorry if that didn't make any sense!! Depressing dosn't even cover it!! Though I wonder why it took so long for him to find her? Great Fic, I enjoyed reading it!! (even if it made me cry!)
MissHaunted-MoonLight
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseAaww! So sad and brilliant.

A morbid combination ...
But I think my mind seems to like that.

You've balanced it perfectly! It's a beautiful little one-shot, and the emotion's really intense and makes you feel like you could actually be living it. I tell ya, if studying does this to you, it can't be all bad, 'cause this was fab!

Looking forward to an update for A different Ending, but don't worry about it being late! I can totally understand how hard it is to write when you're revising for exams. It's a real pain in the **!

Hugs,
MissHaunted-MoonLight
keepholdingon1
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseNice work!
That was really sad!
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