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Reviews for: Developmental Phase Two
Mokuren no Ken 1/2/12 . chapter 1
wow, long flashbacks. soooo fluffy! it was absolutely adorable! looved it. you are an amazing authoress!
Milky Etoile 8/12/09 . chapter 1
Well, I've only started reading on this pair today...and I'll have to say you've made me love it. They're just adorable! X3

Oh, and the way you wrote this is rather good too. I was laughing when the "unidentified falling object" came in. I immediately expected it to be Pierrot, that cool guy. Good thing you included him. He's on my top 5 favorite characters in the series XD

Well, the whole thing's sappy. Don't take that the wrong way. I actually preferred it that way. It's refreshing to read a romance story that goes on and ends perfectly once in a while. It helps a lot that those two would really look good together. They even have matching hair lengths...sort of. I don't even know why I'm pointing that out, but really. They'd look adorable. Imagining those scenes you wrote just made me squeal. Lovely, really.

So, I congratulate you on a job well done! I hope you'll keep on writing! You've managed to interest me in writing for this category...I've never written for Yakitate before. But now, I'm really considering it...

Ah well. You shall see XD

Thanks for posting this! Take care!

Milky Etoile .
Takari4ever3012 5/16/08 . chapter 1
This is so SWEET! I read development already before this so I know the storyline! Are you the only one that writes Shigeru x Kazuma stories? Coz I don't see many of them around T_T Anyways, great story! Looking forward to the update!
Nina-neechan 3/7/08 . chapter 1
nice story!

Is there going to be more chapters?
redSky27 1/26/08 . chapter 1
that was soo sweet! luv it! keep up the great work and stories!
Miharu-tenshi 1/12/08 . chapter 1
yey! just what i wanted, u did resume the fanfic after all... XD

nah, i think the ending is perfect enough..but maybe u should extend it until they're married? hehe..:D

i'd love to read your fanfic's more..n review..but it's near 1 am..DDX my mom even warned me to go to sleep..so, bye2!

oh, er..i said it before at development, but i say it again, k? i love this fanfic n the couple!

n a very happy birthday to you.. :)
takari love 11/16/07 . chapter 1
Wow! That was so sweet...

I can't believe everyone came...even Pierrot...

lol...This is so going to my fav...,

Ja
ryan 4/22/07 . chapter 1
it was AWESOME! i also loved the 1st developmental. hope you make more!
Hikari Manganji 1/25/07 . chapter 1
Belated Happy Bday, sorry I juz read ur story just abt now. Great worl.. i really appreciate ur works coz there are so little ShigeruKazuma fics in here... really, THanKS for writing this heart-warming story. It really cheers me uP! Keep it UP! and don't give uP! :D
Soichiro 1/20/07 . chapter 1
AW that was so sweet! I hope there's a phase 3! Please let there b a phase 3! It was so good! Great job!
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