   psychocitten 12/9/10 . chapter 3ok I love where the story was going I really did, but I am slightly upset with how it is laid up on the page. I don't know about any other readers, but I really can't read the text on a computer screen without some kind of breaks and paragraphs. the first two chapters were awesome and i was excited to read the rest, but I physically can't because I can't freaking tell what line I am on! This is seriously not a dis on you, just the computer and how the text looks on it. Hope you can or will fix it so I can read the rest. Happy writing! |
| Hall 4/19/10 . chapter 7 wow.. I loved the ending. If I was a member of this site, this would so be favourited! Thanks soo much for sharing this awesome story! |
| Hall 4/19/10 . chapter 6 perfect?.. perfect? *sprints to the next chapter* |
| Hall 4/19/10 . chapter 5 I like how easy going everything is going. Talking about their family past was terrific! If only Joss had your genius brain and being true to the show and its characters... well at least there's ffiction.
And xanadu? I listened to it to know what it is... By Olivia N.J. And Angel wants to sing it... LoL, I would have loved to hear it! |
| Hall 4/19/10 . chapter 4 Aww.. so sweet! And she's the most important person he's ever had! I'm so high right now with the C/A-love... And they haven't even kissed! But they will... right? :D |
| Hall 4/19/10 . chapter 3 I'm worried here.. Couldn't you just have made his soul permanent because the quy seems pretty damn happy... Almost too happy, if he and Cordy actually got together... Will they?
Also, the format of the text is all in one big piece, please space it out. Maybe it's FF's fault.
LOVING THIS STORY! |
| Hall 4/19/10 . chapter 2 lol, they're both wearing red... they'll look so hot together! |
| Hall 4/19/10 . chapter 1 Wow.. such acurate characterization! GREAT start too! |
| icekrim91 4/18/10 . chapter 7 aw...so cute and awesome! love it! |
| The Perfect Girls 3/7/03 . chapter 1 i LOVE this story! :) |
| mary 3/31/02 . chapter 7 hey.. congratulations on the story is one of the nicest ones that I have ever read! I mean it... and I want you to know that I totally agree with the angel/cordy relationship they are made for each other. Keep the good work |
| kiruchan 11/23/01 . chapter 7 Awesomeness! |
| Twinkie Pirate 8/28/01 . chapter 7 This was lovely ...*sigh* :) |
| Cassandra Mulder 8/26/01 . chapter 7 *happy sigh* That was so lovely! :) I can't even find words to describe how good this was, and I'm a writer! LOL It was total perfection! I could see David and Charisma acting out everything. Fine, fine work. A lovely piece of writing. - Cassie |
| Cassandra Mulder 8/22/01 . chapter 1 Can't wait to read the rest. :) |
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