"Once he got into bed with Kathryn Janeway, it was hard to get out. She was like a completely different person, somehow. And yet, it was still Kathryn – barking orders and taking charge." hahahahahahahahahahahahaha LOL

I LOVE the story, it's sweet, but was Kathryn alone the whole time waiting for Tom, or did she have some flings in the meantime?

Great story. I really love the way your write your stories, nothing seems forced or over done.

Hey good work on the story, I liked it.

This is a great story, really well written. Well done.

Squeal! Okay, I haven't read this yet, and since I just stayed up half the night reading 'Spinners End,' I won't get to it right away. I just wanted to register my glee that a) I found a new SSHG writer that I like and b) she writes Janeway/Paris, too! Whe! Added your page to my favorites!

I have to say I've never really seen the J/P thing but this is a really cute little story! Very sweet... and you may have just converted me!

This is a great story. I like how you covered all areas of Voyager in terms of timelines. You didn't just throw them into a relationship, and that made the difference. I love how you put in the part about Tom being demoted because that to me was always a very strong point between the two, just like the parts from Threshold. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I loved it!

I just want to say I am very impressed by this story. The characters are very well done, and completely in canon. I love how the whole thing developed slowly, naturally, and how you interwove it with the series itself. Your prose is sweet and simple, and I like it.

I liked how you concentrated on the complexities of the characters, very well done.

This was wonderful. Kathryn and Tom go so well together.

Good job. I'm not sure of the M rating; there wasn't anything in it that I could tell, that seemed to warrant the M. Not that I'm disappointed. Far from it. I enjoyed this story; you captured Janeway and Paris's friendship rather well. I could see this happening post Endgame. Keep up the good work.

Another great story. As already suggest, you should archive this at Jupiter Station, a great website that's in dire need of updating. You do an amazing job with this pairing in this story and your other. Keep it up, I want to read more J/P stories from you!

This is _good_! I really liked this-all the interaction between Tom and Janeway was really there. (of course, any decent starship needs a Designated Bad Boy, or Bad Girl-cf Vash, who could have done that one in her sleep-to amuse the rest and make deals with aliens the others won't touch but the ship needs anyway).

Good story!

Amazing. One of the best JPs I've read in a while. You should archive it at the Jupiter Station (w. if you haven't already. That site has a pretty big archieve of JP fics.