A really cute and heartwarming story. I love how Orihime is so incredibly sweet and her odd sense of humour

I guess Hitsugaya would be reflecting about Hinamori and problems up on that roof by himself. Due to what happened in the past, with people staring at him like a freak, labeling him as an outsider because of his looks and his personality and not even trying to get to know him, he has a perfectly justible reason not to be able to trust people easily... plus with what happened with Aizen and Hinamori...

Orihime cooking again. Watch out Hitsugaya. Nice, sweet little story.

Such a very good story. It may be your first entry into Bleach, but I think you hit all of it exactly right on the head. There's layers to this story, and I can already tell that I'll be thinking about it later. Thank you for writing it!

Aww, Division Ten friendship

The ease with which you bring across their personalities is great. You don't need a lot of words or descriptions, just a simple observation from another character, or some dialogue. It makes for very nice reading.

I like that Kubo Tite hints at the bond that Hitsugaya and Matsumoto have, and that authors can draw from that what they may. And you drew something that was perceptive and real. And then you balanced it out with a lightheartedness that is true for all relationships. Funny Orihime doesn't hurt either, haha. Just a random tiny detail I especially liked: Hitsugaya tip-toeing to reach the counter. Cute, haha.

- Sakura

love this _ you show the friendship of hitsugaya and matsumoto really well!

This is a very well-written piece. Cheers for you. The dialogue and the characterizations were perfect. And I liked the fact that the story didn't only revolve arounf Hitsugaya and Matsumoto but towards the end, it revolved around Orihime, and the idea od having a family again.

I totally adore this fic and I hope you could write more Bleach fanfics in the future. Thank you.

I don't normally say the word 'cute' but I think I'll have to risk it for this one.

Aw.. Men! This is so cute..

VERY cute. Great dialogue and interactions between matsumoto and Hitsugaya. Great imagery and a real nice...slice of life moments in the Bleach world without immediate fear of a hollow or some catastrophe. Keep up the good work!

I love how you write Orihime. She cracks me up. :D Cute story!

The fics you write flow like water.

As in, they make for wonderful reading. It's lovely, the way you portray the three of them.

I think you've written their personalities perfectly, without stereotyping them to death.

Write another, if you please!

Oh, nice cute fic between thsoe two... I like it

well, more than a funny story it was a kinda sad one, but that of course means nothing really cus the story itself was very good...the conversation between the characters was very deep and mature...i liked what u said...

Very well rounded first chapter with inner thoughts from all. I really enjoyed this and look forward to new chapters!

Nice work!