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| Lachesis 2007-12-19 ch 1,  | abuseSuch a very good story. It may be your first entry into Bleach, but I think you hit all of it exactly right on the head. There's layers to this story, and I can already tell that I'll be thinking about it later. Thank you for writing it! |
| Sakura-Angel2 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseAww, Division Ten friendship ♥ The ease with which you bring across their personalities is great. You don't need a lot of words or descriptions, just a simple observation from another character, or some dialogue. It makes for very nice reading. I like that Kubo Tite hints at the bond that Hitsugaya and Matsumoto have, and that authors can draw from that what they may. And you drew something that was perceptive and real. And then you balanced it out with a lightheartedness that is true for all relationships. Funny Orihime doesn't hurt either, haha. Just a random tiny detail I especially liked: Hitsugaya tip-toeing to reach the counter. Cute, haha. - Sakura |
| kingleby 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuselove this ^_^ you show the friendship of hitsugaya and matsumoto really well! |
| Thien Minh 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very well-written piece. Cheers for you. The dialogue and the characterizations were perfect. And I liked the fact that the story didn't only revolve arounf Hitsugaya and Matsumoto but towards the end, it revolved around Orihime, and the idea od having a family again. I totally adore this fic and I hope you could write more Bleach fanfics in the future. Thank you. |
| fuga 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseI don't normally say the word 'cute' but I think I'll have to risk it for this one. Aw.. Men! This is so cute.. |
| SxStrngSamurai13 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseVERY cute. Great dialogue and interactions between matsumoto and Hitsugaya. Great imagery and a real nice...slice of life moments in the Bleach world without immediate fear of a hollow or some catastrophe. Keep up the good work! |
| Fyerbelle 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abuseI love how you write Orihime. She cracks me up. :D Cute story! |
| Anon. 2007-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe fics you write flow like water. As in, they make for wonderful reading. ^^ It's lovely, the way you portray the three of them. I think you've written their personalities perfectly, without stereotyping them to death. Write another, if you please! |
| LittleLinor 2007-01-23 ch 1, | abuseOh, nice cute fic between thsoe two... I like it^^ |
| viper 2007-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abusewell, more than a funny story it was a kinda sad one, but that of course means nothing really cus the story itself was very good...the conversation between the characters was very deep and mature...i liked what u said... |
| EtoileEyes 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseVery well rounded first chapter with inner thoughts from all. I really enjoyed this and look forward to new chapters!! |
| signalbox 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseNice work! |
| lotrmatrixstarwarsfan 2007-01-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a really lovely fic. Everyone is so in-character and there are so many little nuggets of gold like hitsugaya's emotions being as stunted as his height. This is a good exploration that lends the characters greater depth. Just guh. Please keep writing more bleach! |
| KaRisa-Hime 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abusehahahah thiS storY is sO fuNny ,, I liked iT sO far and Hitsugaya was so cool .. MatsumotO was so fuNnY .. wriTe mOre story sOme time ^^ |
| Seven Black Roses 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseHighly entertaining, and the dialogue between Matsumoto and Hitsu was just great. Thumps up for the great work!! |