:)you relly made natsume a pervert...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
That was the longest life in my whole (but still going on) life!
Oh my... Natsume really is a pervert! Oh and did you see? In the manga, Natsume TOOK MIKAN'S UNDERWEAR OFF instead of her skirt like in the anime!

Okay then, lmao, it wasn't you!

LOLOLOLOL oh so faved! great work. not like those mushy stuff '"Oh i didn't know you loved me" Mikan said, tears running down her face...' very original, great job!

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hahahahahahahahha!...that may me laughed until i can utter no more words!haha... that was so funny, especially the ending part..haha..i held my stomach tightly for i was about to explode with laughter!hehehe..that was a nice one!hahahhahahahahahahaha!


sori for the many"haha"!it was just i cant stop my laughter when i wrote this review!haha

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shucks. im too young! ahaha. kiddin. XD

cute :)

HAHAHAHA proves it Natsume IS a PERVERT!

LOL! hahaha! its way too funny! nyahahaha! LOL! wahh! *falls on the computer chair* good! nice one! *laughing her heart out*

lol Natsume is soo perverted lol but kawaii

Natsume has such a perveted mind don't u think ?

hi! it's me again.. wahaha.. i think you are running out of ideas.. hehe.. who knew you could write this.. hehe.. great NEW writing style.. hehe.. love it.. great job! keep it up.. i was suppose to give u my review personally but it seems ur busy so, here it is.. sorry i'm also busy to scan through this again.. hehe.. keep up the great work! ja!

Erinn~

Great plot.. wahaha

haha I ha cant AHAHAHAHA stop hahaha laughing hahaha too cute love it hahahaha 10 stars

This is a cute and funny story. Please make some more. Mikan and Natsume forever.