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AshK 2008-04-21 ch 15,	abuseNice update as always! Keep up the great work! Sincerely, AshK
ranma girl 14 2008-04-20 ch 15,	abuseNice, very crazy things going on. I liked the first Omake, that made me laugh alot. plz plz plz update fast! ^_^
Dragon Man 180 2008-04-20 ch 15,	abuseThe Narita family tree still confuses me... it's freaking impossible to keep everyone straight besides Nodoka and Ranma. And now I find out Hinako has five kids... brain overload. Will Goro be taken out at some point? He's to crazy to be left in charge of a clan...
ranma girl 14 2008-03-19 ch 14,	abuseNice chapter, though the use of certain names for multiple people is kinda confusing. >_< plz plz plz update soon! ^_^
Asgeras 2008-03-19 ch 14,	abuseIt's always nice to come back to a good Ranma fic, especially after having read so many HORRID Naruto fics. Not that all of them were bad...but I digress. Thanks for the update, although I wish you'd spent a little more time with each of the characters. It seemed like the only thing that really happened was with the whole Ryoga/Noriko omiai/engagement. Well, I guess there's also the fact that Ranma seems to be coming somewhat to terms with her femininity, but we don't see a ton of that, outside of the clothes shopping and minor attraction for Ryoga. Well, thanks again for the update. I look forward to future updates, so keep 'em coming. ^^
. 2008-03-18 ch 14, anon.	abuseMy head hurts. I can't tell who's who and who's related to who and how. Way too many characters sharing the same name and/or described as looking similar to each other.
Excel 2008-03-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseExcellent!
AshK 2008-03-18 ch 14,	abuseNice Update Lio! It's been a while since you've updated. Good to see that you're still writing! Keep up the great work! Sincerely, AshK
Howard Russell 2008-03-18 ch 14,	abuseFun stuff! Love what you're doing to the gang. Poor Usagi does not need Kasumi trying to fix her up. Your Kasumi is too twisted and evil.
Dragon Man 180 2008-03-17 ch 14,	abuseI need a family tree of Nodoka's family... everything is so confusing with all the different names...
Chrysicat 2007-10-29 ch 13,	abuseOkay...the identicals in this family are getting to be almost too much to keep track of... And personally, I don't think it's _just_ Kasumi's rules that make female-Ranma so feminine...though I'm sure he'll wind up paired with a girl just the same... 'course, I think I've already mentioned all that...but I haven't mentioned...Janitor with no name? Did he transfer from Scrubs? Still going well...too bad it's been over a month since the last update...
Asgeras 2007-09-22 ch 13,	abuseGood little fic. Heck...great little fic :P Let me start, however, with reiterating the confusion caused by continuous use of masculine pronouns in order to describe Ranma, even when 'he' is a 'she'. Other than that, it's a very interesting read so far. I find myself looking forward, with a great deal of anticipation, to the differences that will happen. Obviously, Noriko will end up engaged to Ryoga, while Ryoga will probably stay blissfully ignorant of the fact that she's not Ranma. Akane and Ranma will continue to draw closer. However, the fact that Ranma is more feminine than herself might end up killing their relationship. At least she's not quite as violent as she is in canon. ^^ Goro will end up finding Genma. Because of that, Genma might end up disappearing for a prolonged period of time (probably a month, or so). Natsume and Ranma will grow closer to each other. After a while, they might grow close enough for Ranma to treat Natsume as a confidante. Nabiki will figure out that Ryoga is the boy who gave her the teddy bear when she was six. Because of this, Nabiki will probably end up fighting over Ryoga with Noriko, assuming that Noriko is for the marriage to Ryoga. Ryoko will confront Ranma, but Ranma will end up convincing her not to fight. Voila, there's fiancee number 2. Natsume and Kasumi will end up drawing a little closer together. This could very likely occur as a result of Natsume witnessing an attack from Kuno. Lastly (hey, I'm tired :P), Ranma will end up getting to know his Aunts family. I'm looking forward to seeing the various interactions the Ninomoyas will have with Ranma and crew. Well, that's it for now. Once again, thanks for what you've written so far. I'm looking forward to reading more in the (hopefully) near future.
Asgeras 2007-09-21 ch 9,	abuseI realize that you try to bypass the Ranma random pronoun game by informing the readers of the appropriate pronoun at the very beginning of the chapter. However, this isn't always completely correct. For instance, in this chapter, Ranma is obviously in his male form while he's at the Tendo dojo. Shoot, he even gets close to kissing Akane. However, you tend to want to enforce the fact that Ranma thinks of himself as a 'man', even when he's pretending to be a girl, by using 'he' no matter what the situation. It's your fic, so do what you want, but it can be a little on the confusing side of things. As for a more fulfilling review, I'll write one after I've read everything you've written so far. Rest assured, though, I'm liking this fic quite a lot.
James Axelrad 2007-09-19 ch 13,	abuseits a fun chapter. i only wish that they came out a little quicker than they have been.
Fire Dragon Master 2007-09-17 ch 13,	abusegreat Story, Please update.

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