Good story but... OMG? really? They didn't have text talk in those days. They don't have cellphones, so the can't text. So, no text talk. but good story.

I love it. At least I didn't have to read about Hattie's mean behavior..lol

Um...Nice idea...A little out of character...I don't think writing is exactly your calling though...

AHAHA! ELLA SAID OMG!1 BRILLIANT, MATE, ABOLUTELY BRILL!

Yipee! the curse is gone!

I like this still! :) And yes Char does have a younger sister her name is Cecilia I think

I like this story and will like it even if it has short chapters! I can't wait to read more!

I like this chapter and it's longer so that's good:) (SMILES) this is good! sorry for pestering you earlier in three other reviews.

I sure hope the curse will be broken.

I like this story :) I don't mean to pester you but I would really like some longer chapters, I Still like this story! It's pretty good... Okay it's awesome!

I would really like longer chapters but I still like this story!

I think this is good but I'd appriciate if the chapters were longer... But no offense I like short chapters as well.

Pretty good so far :)

They wouldn't notice some of your mistakes if you didn't point them out...remember, my reviews are meant to be helpful and I'm sorry if they seem otherwise.

Constructive Critism: You appear a bit rude, soften up and relax in your notes! There is no need to get defensive, everyone makes mistakes.