 pealee 2007-04-28 . chapter 8That was beautifully heartbreaking! |
 tidbit2008 2007-04-27 . chapter 8Sad but I suppose it is fitting. In another life, perhaps. But I like how this story was an incite(sp?) into what their relationship was, instead of changing it.
It was beautifully written, the whole story, I can't stress that enough. Very eloquent.
Thanks so much for sharing it with us! I've loved getting the e-mail that a new chapter was up :)
I'll be looking forward to your next story(at least I'm assuming there will be a next one). |
 tidbit2008 2007-03-07 . chapter 6Another beautifully crafted chapter :)
Can't wait to read the next installment. |
 JackofSpade 2007-03-07 . chapter 6Favorite Line: He mentioned Leo and Cancer and Cygnus and Aquarius, told her about the legends and the myths.
Self serving on this one...I'm a child of the Sign of Leo :-) |
 JackofSpade 2007-03-07 . chapter 5Favorite Line: A brush on the canvas, followed by a knowing, understanding glance; a new line in her drawing, thick or thin, black or colored, followed by a brush of his lips on hers.
The languid feel to this installment has made it my favorite so far! |
 Sammy Elle 2007-02-23 . chapter 5I Like the fic very much but I would prefer to read actually more about what they are doing and why they are doing what they´re doing(How and why did it happened?)and not only what they imagine they were as persons and what they will do as this person! |
 Mariel3 2007-02-22 . chapter 5I've loved all of these. I find the vivid imagery amazing, and am blown away by the depth of response I feel when reading your words. It's an absolute pleasure to see updates on this. Thanks for the enjoyment! |
 tidbit2008 2007-02-18 . chapter 5Wondefully written, per usual :)
Can't wait to read the next installment! |
 Kookee 2007-02-18 . chapter 5"And she'd paint him without help, because she knew him by heart"
Oh this story just makes me melt every time I read it! They way that you use words is so beautiful and you really do manage to create a whole new world, just for Jack and Sam.
And yes I would much rather her be a painter than a knitter! ;) |
 pealee 2007-02-17 . chapter 5Great chapter again. I'm so impressed by your story:) |
 JackofSpade 2007-02-13 . chapter 4Favorite Line: He was the musician and she was playing with him, and it required no effort, because they were already in tune.
Don't want to sound cliche, but "hauntingly beautiful" really says it best. |
 kiddo33 2007-02-08 . chapter 4Pretty sure that one gave me shivers. You're such a descriptive writer and I love it! |
 crazy10 2007-02-06 . chapter 4Aww...sweet! This just paints a pretty picture in my head. :P Great job! I can't wait for yor next chapter. |
 tidbit2008 2007-02-06 . chapter 4That was lovely :) Thanks for sharing. I can't wait to read the next installment. |
 pealee 2007-02-06 . chapter 4This story is great. Your imagary is amazing. The symbolism is outstanding. Keep up the amazing work! |