 Iyath Sharyf 2009-11-23 . chapter 1 Great story, love it! |
 Shubhs 2009-07-10 . chapter 1REALLY LIKE this one shot!I am favouriting it!XP XD XD |
 Don't Use Anymore. 2008-12-16 . chapter 1I think you did quite well. |
 sophia666 2008-05-17 . chapter 1Interesting. I loved the confident, dangerous Shizune and the preyed on Kabuto and their whole relationship. I hope you write more of this pairing. Great writing. |
 raspberry soap 2008-04-03 . chapter 1Damn, random. This was frakkin' awesome. I love it as a one-shot, but I'd worship it as a multi-chapter with some lemony goodness.
Who else is gonna be able to do that but you? *tries not to whine* |
 kirakuni01 2008-02-19 . chapter 1This was really interesting. I have a soft spot for Kabuto/Shizune and this was so them! |
 OrigamiGirl 2008-01-27 . chapter 1Wow! I love it! |
 Banana Ninja 2007-12-03 . chapter 1I've never read a decent Kabuto/Shizune fanfic before. This was very interseting for me. |
 sesshygirl3 2007-10-14 . chapter 1I've read a lot of Shizune/Kabuto centric pieces, but this is the only realistic one. It's so well written and believable, I love it. Great job! |
 Emma-Bishop 2007-08-24 . chapter 1Very enjoyable. It's hard to find decent Kabuto and Shizune fanfiction, my thanks and compliments. |
 woofyy 2007-08-06 . chapter 1nice technical words there xDD your style is good! i think this would've been a good long story if you asked me xDD good luckies with your future stories! xDD |
 CantarellaKisses 2007-07-26 . chapter 1Go Shizune, go Shizune. I liked this. Not in any way overly fluffy, and the cat-and-mouse game made it so enjoyable to read. Good job. |
 Annie 2007-05-12 . chapter 1 Wow, that was interesting.
I really liked it a lot, and, I mean, normally I'm a super advocate of lots of excessive romance, but this made me happy without it. Like, excessive romance would have been out of place here, and I think the way you've written it fits these two very nicely.
I encourage you to write more! And I hope very much so that you do, because if you ever write more about Shizune and Kabuto... Well, to put it mildly, I'd be very interested in reading it. |
 Ash 2007-04-07 . chapter 1 I think this is the first time a writer has entranced me so and wasn't published. I'd never even dreamt of these two in this situation, yet you made it work! |
 Duelle 2007-02-08 . chapter 1such a cute fic u have senora, i hope you write a sequal i would love to see it wel Adios for now and bueno suerte! |