oh wow~
poor Gippal, didn't expect Rikku to react that way
but nice oneshot anyways~
=)

That was completely Gippal.
Much love. It'd be kinda nice to see a Rikku side of this. ^^

Wow. I really enjoyed this. It was wonderful. Nice work! :D

hello again! sorry i haven't reviewed in a while but i had major exams then it was christmas and new year and an overseas holiday and i had so little time. still, it's nice to come back from all that and see that you've outdone yourself yet again. and just when i thought it was impossible too. I honestly think that you are the only person who is able to relate so well to Rikku and Gippal, the latter particularly. it's so amazing, it's like YOU created the characters, not empathised with them. and you definitely know how to wring a person's heart. Fantastic stuff as always. =D

I think you did really well on Gippal's characterization. I can really imagine this as their first encounter. I love how he's all about simple sex, but decides he's not really up for it at the end. I think anyone can relate to this, or, at least, a similar situation. Very nice.

SMILE! :)

This story is awesome!

I really love how you write. The characters seem MORE realistic-- as if they aren't just some pixels on the TV screen. How the two main characters thinks and reacts always surprises me. But that's normal, because it's Gippal and Rikku. What less can you expect xD?

Loved it!

amazing piece of literature you have written! you are truly an amazing author! I love all of you stories! PLEASE RIGHT MORE!! Take care and God Bless!

I really loved this you really do capture the personalities of Rikku and Gippal well

aw thats so sad! please, could you do a sequel? I know that it says complete, but did you have to leave it there, just when he starts to think that he loves her! Or makes me think that... but thats not the point! Please! It was so good!

That was a very good read. It was cool how it turned out differently than Gippal thought it would.

I really enjoyed reading this. There isn't any admittance of feelings for one another, but it's still there. I think it's stronger because of the lack of vocalization. THe last sentence is my favorite, very good. I also really enjoyed how Rikku just calmly woke up. Very un-Rikku. I'm wondering if she is going with the friends-with-benefits approach because it's what she wants, or because it's all she can get?

Great story! I love how Gippal thinks he knows what to expect, only to have Rikku prove otherwise. It gets a good chuckle out of me when Rikku does things to shock him.

This was very well done. I liked the way he's having to re-evaluate what he thinks of her. I'm glad he wasn't happy about maybe hurting her feelings and the way you ended it was great.