A great story. Very good.

WOW. This was tragically beautiful. Poor Thomas...I always hate that scene from the movie...

Ooh, that's good! Exactly what he'd be thinking!
Excellent!

Ah, dear, clumsy, lovable Thomas. He was always my favorite character in the movie. I like the whole stream of thought thing you've got here.

Congratulations on giving some love to Thomas. I liked him in the movie and well, to see this makes me smile. I feel that you've captured his thoughts brilliantly. ^^

I think you did a really good job with this. Not many people seem to pay attention to Thomas, despite the fact that he's a rather important character. You did an accurate job of describing what someone's thoughts might be like just after they've killed for the first time. (I wouldn't know for sure, but what you wrote was plausible.) Great job,
~outlaw author

If I had killed somebody I'd probably be crying. I mean it's scary enough when you think your going to accidently shoot your sister.

OMG, this was good, I can't wait for more.

That was a good story. I got your review on my story on the first chapter. Im sorry you feel that way,but everybody has thier own oppion. Anyways, this is my first story so its not the best. Im still working on fixing it up. But as far as the spelling on it, there's a lot that I cant do about it. I dont have a spell checker on compter, so Im spelling it the best I can. Once my story is fix you can read it if you want. But please dont judge me because of the bad formating or spelling. My story is still a work in progress.

Very nice!

This was very well written, great job! One of my favorite parts about it is you had Thomas comtimplating the, "Indian woman." Even who she was in relation to the, "Indian man."
I hope to see more Pocahontas fanfics from you!

Oh wow. You don't see many fics about Thomas and this one is awesome!

-Robin