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Daystar Searcher
2009-03-18 . chapter 1
M, angst, it's not just for breakfast anymore...*nom nom nom*...so, where's Part 2?! I need my fix! :)
Tracey Claybon
2008-07-25 . chapter 1
Deliciously dark. Please - do the sequel... this is too much like a season ending cliffhanger for my liking! :)

I also wanted to comment on the suicide episode here - you got Bobby's feelings down fairly well but resolution of the suicidal emotions will not be a quick thing, and Eames would have to be very supportive and strong to keep him together while he recovers.
untapdtreasure81
2008-07-10 . chapter 1
this was a topic of a "need help finding a fic" at amorous intent. Someone finally posted the link and read it! WOW! this was dark...and heavy! I'm off to read the sequel now!
JackSam
2008-07-09 . chapter 1
Love it. Add more soon.
OuroborosSnyder
2008-01-05 . chapter 1
OMG, so awesome! I really loved it. I like how dark it was. I looked for a sequel but didn't see one =( Are you going to write one?
~Snyder~
sky m
2007-11-13 . chapter 1
great story, poor Bobby I'm glad you have Alex understanding and ensuring him of their partnership. Did you get around to a sequel yet?
Andy
2007-10-01 . chapter 1
hey not to sound complainy or whiny but I'm still waiting for the sequel to this ditty! Hope you continue it cause I love it, even if it is dark, at least its BA
RussianWolf7
2007-09-11 . chapter 1
No! Wait! Where's the rest? What's it called? Help!

xoxox
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cilover
2007-05-14 . chapter 1
This is awesome, you have talent! your depiction of bobby and alex's relationship is fabulous.
Kismet23
2007-03-28 . chapter 1
Oh, I am SO mad at myself for missing this story! Marion, what a beautifully written piece. Angsty and scary and touching all at the same time. Just outstanding.
The Confused One
2007-02-26 . chapter 1
Oh My Fucking God! *Sobbing* You're going to kill me. Between the ending of "Ivy Green" and this... I'm just... I NEED YOU TO FIX THIS. LOL You must finish this sequel, and get the sequel to "Ivy Green" done and finally get them together! It's been SO many stories! LOL Sorry, I'm just seriously shaking and sobbing right now. VERY beautiful and upsetting. LOL
MistressSara
2007-02-12 . chapter 1
Very nice! I like it. However let me just say, I'm from Erie PA and there is no such thing as a freak snow storm there. We know that it's coming, we know in October that it's coming. Heehee. Nice work.
GraciePie
2007-01-29 . chapter 1
Oh. My. God. Oh my god, oh my god, ohmygod! Crying over here! Wow. I don't even know what to say other than Amazing and ohmygod over and over. Awesome job. Please do update soon :)
Eienvine
2007-01-25 . chapter 1
I need the sequel. NOW.

Good fic.
TriStateCopFan
2007-01-20 . chapter 1
Good beginning..such angst, but always the underlying passion between these two is apparent. Aside from some questions I have about "geography" issues (i.e., I live in NJ...I'm pretty sure none of the Great Lakes are near; and I always thought that the New England states are more like CT, RI, MA, ME, etc...)but I can overlook that, 'cause the "meat" of the story is good. Bobby's suicide attempt has to be treated very seriously. Someone that despondent needs professional help. I mean, if it hadn't been for the weather and his gun malfunctioning, the idiot would have succeeded!! (Also, I don't Bobby's gun would be neglected or in disrepair...esp. as an ex-army person and given his organized fastidious nature.)
Anyway, I'm anxious to see what happens next. I hope Alex has some comforting words/actions to bring Bobby back from the dark side. Good job!
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