I'm enjoying this story a lot! Don't quit now, it's getting interesting! You've done a good job with Don and Maya's characters and your OCs never overshadow them. Keep it up!

Loved this chapter. Don't worry, I think you're doing good with Maya's character. I'm actually having the same problem with her when her spirit shows up in my story so I've just decided to take some creative liberties and make up the rest of her personality.

Nobody's put a clip of that up on Youtube? The clip from ep.18? *goes to Youtube and searches for it--seriously, I am* Wow, I came up empty. That must be remedied. I'll upload the clip and leave you the link on the OSR forum, shall I?

Once again, I eagerly await the next chapter.

*goes off to upload clip*

Don't stop posting. Your story is so good. It would be cruel to leave the readers hanging.
I love the interaction between Don and Maya. 'Twas really cute! ^^ Plus, I loved how Don stood up to Taylor, even though Taylor seems kind of like how Don is at the begining of the series.

Cool. I love it, although I'm getting close to hating Taylor... Scratch that, I already hate him.
Anyways, I love how you're making Maya's bad moods seem a bit like Eva/Molly's. It's funny, but I'm not even sure if you're doing it on purpose, it's really subtle.

I was wondering when one of these would pop up. I've been waiting! Where have you been?! I was actually starting to think about writing one myself, but romance isn't really my forte...

I really like it. And I eagerly await the next chapter!

OMG! I positively love this! No, I haven't read any fics like this before, and that's probably why this makes this story so exiting!
It focus on Don and Maya is really cool, I love how you play on their charcters, and all the random OC's make the story realistic and fun!
Please keep writing and give us a another chapter. It's so good. I want to read more.

Love it!