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Violet Shadows
2008-04-30
ch 8,
abuseIn the immortal words of Shampoo, "This too too funny."
harry shall rise
2007-11-09
ch 8,
abuseLove the story, update soon.
dogbertcarroll
2007-11-09
ch 7,
abuseActually I do have several things to say, but mostly it would be negative so I didn't bother putting in a review.
P.S.P
2007-05-18
ch 8, anon.
abuseGreat,awsome,cool and colonge in the next chapter perhaps.
She of all the Ranma 1/2 cast would know Ranma was back mabe nabiki too.
Just an idea =^_^=

Pan
Sara
Peter

P.S.P
AMWOOD co
2007-03-20
ch 8,
abuseYou have the second long non-lemon pokegirl fic I have seen to date. Kudos to you. It is not an easy thing to do, but seems like a good one for the genre as it creates more of an emphasis on plot (or comedy for the large part of Innortal's story).

I, personally, like the idea of the ever expanding pokedex entry for Ranma. I say keep it up.

From the offices of AMWOOD co
Alex Ultra
2007-02-14
ch 8,
abuseSomehow, Happosai doing what he (apparently) did seems truly reasonable, that he would be the type to do so. I'm somewhat surprised that the Phoenix's didn't so much as give him trouble, but I suppose needing to recover the life of their God-King would keep them from fighting the one who started the school that his slayer used.

And being at Jusenkyo means that attacks on him are likely to either create more (unfortunate) victims, or more accursed springs, which may explain where the Spring of Drowned Amazon Warrior would have come from, if there wasn't already one there.

As for Ranma being 'captured', I'm just happy that 'she' wasn't _totally_ subjugated, let alone 'Tamed'; one could argue that it is a good thing that Ranma wasn't caught by a creep with no regard for the rights of 'Pokégirls'. Though also, not being like a combat goddess makes her simply seem more reasonable, not to mention making it seem more reasonable that she would want to fight in the first place, let alone stick around with Ash.

I'm sure I have other thoughts, but I think I'll wait until we can MSN for that. ^^?

Alex Ultra: Gotta Catch At Least Six
LATER
AJ
2007-02-01
ch 8, anon.
abuseCool beans.
cs
2007-01-27
ch 8, anon.
abuseIts pretty good. You need to make longer chapters and post them fater if not u probly wont keep my attention or others for that matter. We cant wait forever.
Jace
2007-01-25
ch 8, anon.
abuseAfter this chapter the entry should also add Strong VS: Rock. Also "her" entry states that her role is only combat...I think that "she" has some skills that would be considered useful in camping out considering how he spent ten years of his life. There also might be a mention of the attacks that Ranma has avaible when in the neko-ken-specifically the ki claws. There also might need to be a note in this entry that taming is unnessesary, and would be, in fact, counterproductive, quite possibly reulting in injury for the party attempting to tame Ranma.
Upgrade
2007-01-23
ch 8,
abuseOuch. Breaking Point on a rock type. That had to hurt.

Oh, of course Yui went with that guy. Must be a Hibiki.
Upgrade
2007-01-23
ch 7,
abuseBoth Ranma and Ash now have a 'rival'. Nice.
And Ash got laid. I bet he feels better now.
James Axelrad
2007-01-23
ch 8,
abusegreat episode. lots of fun.
Hiryo
2007-01-22
ch 8,
abuseI like those 'updated' entries of 'Ranma the Pokegirl'
VERY MUCH!

As well I have to say that his chapter fits in quite nicely
into the rest of the chapters and I liked how the fight went
by your description and the fight itself!

Hope to read from ya soon!
ranma hibiki
2007-01-22
ch 8,
abuselooks like no matter what the ryoga, they will always have no sense of direction! =D
sandcrawlr
2007-01-22
ch 8,
abuseSweet story man. And I say keep the pokedex entry for Ranma. Its fun to compare them to the previous ones.
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