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Reviews for: One Too Many
Saku-Chan9876
2009-05-16 . chapter 3
Great Story!
Although I'm Sad Your Not Continuing It...
But Awesome Nonetheless ^^
~Saku-Chan
AmQaudrus
2008-04-17 . chapter 3
I LOVED ITT !
Continuee ! pleasse ! pleasee ! pleasee ! :D
LOOVE IT !!

I'm Waiting

Sweets Q.
Tevana
2007-11-26 . chapter 3
That was cute with Tea and... Akefia. I read somewhere that that's his name in egypt. I'm just use to Ryou (light) and Bakura (Yami), but using Akefia for the Yami makes seens. Great chapter by the way.|D
PinkxxxReaper
2007-09-28 . chapter 3
Sweet fic update soon
mire013
2007-03-03 . chapter 3
update
Soul of AquaBlue
2007-03-03 . chapter 3
BakuraxTeaxSeto. I love that triangle ^_^
update soon
AlphaSigma
2007-02-25 . chapter 2
this is very good
bubbles05
2007-02-24 . chapter 2
wonderful chapter ^^

keep it up, *waits till the next update*

\(^^)/ tea rules
naSHa....
2007-02-24 . chapter 1
that was great!!
i really like the idea cause i LOVE
Anzu/Tea!
but i hope that she would be with setoo!!
i really like that couple
please keep writing!!
squozen-juice
2007-01-23 . chapter 1
YO! this is kool! update soon =D
pleaase.

well buhbye

*faves story and author*
Innocentenough
2007-01-15 . chapter 1
Yey ^^! Nice storyline! i like the idea of all of them liking her but i really want Atemu to go out with her, they make the cutest couple!

=^^=
Good story cant wait for the next chapter
Scarabbug
2007-01-15 . chapter 1
I like it :) I really had a good mental image of the boys staring at Anzu/Tea/whatever here and I can really buy them admiring her like that.

Occasionally it seemed a bit melodramatic (using the word Orbs for eyes, for example, is way overdone) but the style has a great deal of potential, as do you.

Btw I should point out - just labelling something as AU to excuse OOCness isn't enough and doesn't pass in my books or many others. The trick with Au's is to get the characters to either act a) as they do in the series or b) in a way that would be plausible had they been brought up in that particular AU environment. That's why most people either don't bother with au's or try to write their characters lives in a similar way to canon. This feels like The term AU is being used as an excuse for OOCness. That doesn't work.
mire013
2007-01-14 . chapter 1
yea i hope she ends up wit seto so plz update
starfairy25
2007-01-14 . chapter 1
It looks pretty good and interesting so far. Since I'm a huge Azureshipping fan, I hope that Tea ends up with Seto ;). Please update soon!
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