this story is hilarious XD

I lost it at the Orochmaru part..classic lol

A funny short story really not much to say besides... if Kiba used a nuculaar generator and a coat hanger he could of been one of thouse guys who told the future. I liked the slap stick jokes funny some where between ha ha funny and lol. Well it is proberly (at least to my unskilled eyes) punctuated and all that stuff you learn in middle school. Well yeah...

this was a really good story, i liked it allot! ^_^

How Ten-Ten knew how to play the piano was unknown to all...
But how Kiba managed to dance is the MOST unbelievable of all!

whew...poor Temari...having to wait for the sleeping Shikamaru...but hey, that's just him...lucky for Shika, she loves him...or she'll not shut up with the kiss...(o.o)

Lol, poor Kiba.

Aw. This is a sweet one-shot. Its really creative and well written. Keep it up!

lmao the broom string chair banana and dog. that made me laugh really hard. and the implied orochimaru-being-gayness was funneh too