Reviews for A Fork in the Road

Reviews For: A Fork in the Road - Reviews: Page 1 of 5

ObiBettina7 2008-08-25 ch 8,	abuseGood story! Please continue.
Burenda 2008-04-17 ch 8,	abuseThis is a great story. You made some daring changes to the original canon, but the way you're handling it only makes the story that much more enjoyable. Everyone I've seen so far has been remarkably in character, which is no small feat in itself, and the story itself is fascinating and a delight to follow. I find myself in delicious anticipation of what's going to happen next. Keep up the good work and good luck writing!
sports_devil86 2008-04-09 ch 8, anon.	abusegreat story so far. love it. i can't wait to read more. hopefully you will update very very soon. i will be looking forward to reading the next chapter.
charie 2008-01-10 ch 8,	abuseGreat chapter! Keep it coming please.
Calimora 2007-12-10 ch 8, anon.	abuseWhoop! That's a cliff-hanger, sans cliff! This has been a fun read , and I hope to see more of it!
Fhulhi the Crazy 2007-12-06 ch 8,	abuseVery good chapter! Obi-wan was being so brave, I just wanna hug the stuffing out of him! X3
Ann Jinn 2007-12-05 ch 8,	abuseThose new nephews, so inconsiderate. congratulations. Trust me and jumps out the window. So like a guy. Wonderful
monkyluvr 2007-12-05 ch 8,	abusehe jumps he flys or he lands on his head? guess i have to wait! keep going pls!
i luv ewansmile 2007-12-03 ch 8,	abuseYay, Qui-gon to the rescue! And what a amazing encounter it was! (And fantastically written if I may say so.) Obi-wan is indeed very powerful or so it seems. I'm glad to finally see a story depicting Obi-wan as the Chosen One, and I have to say I truly love it! Your action scenes are truly awesome. Your writing continuings to amaze me, very good work. Wonderful opening entrance for Qui-gon, very elogent way of descriping him as "tall and regal", and also," the long-haired warrior" I dunno but that image really worked for Qui-gon and this scene. Aha, you put a smile on my face with these lines, "All things considered, Master Jinn; I would have to say that I have certainly been better,” Obi-Wan quipped with a dry chuckle. The youth felt decidedly giddy at this turn of events and could just barely restrain himself from grinning when he saw Qui-Gon quirk an eyebrow at his odd show of humor." Your writing and play of words, is just mesmorizing, the fighting is very impressive, and easily pictured and thrilling to read. Oh, and vision of Qui-gon's death was great, nice touch to add into the story, wow and thats brillant thinking about Obiwan using the data of the double edged sabre to save Qui-gon. Other than that, I'm suprized Obi-wan wasn't more shaken than he was at such a revelation of Qui-gon dying in the vision, but then again it's just a vision, nothing that has truly happened, and Qui-gon was currently winning his fight with Maul. Aha, it was a funny image of Obi-wan slappig Qui-gon into consciousness. Oh, the twists in this story was brillant! Loved how the "Darkone" blocked their exit, very clever planning. Kind of reckless of Qui-gon to not apprehend his assailant when he had the chance too, since the Jedi are supposed to arrest/kill the Sith. And I understand that he wanted to help Obi-wan, but his injury is not life threatening or at least you havn't written it that way, just he's lost a lot of blood and has no use of the limb. A thousand-story drop! Oh my! Way to build the suspence! Claps :) “Obi-Wan, I need you to trust me,” the Jedi Master stated, only realizing once the words were out of his mouth, what he was truly asking of the boy. He, who had thrown this boy aside; he, who had unintentionally set this turn of events into motion now needed this one child’s trust, even though he knew he did not deserve it. Solemn blue-green eyes looked up at him. “Yes Master. I trust you.” And with those words, Qui-Gon tightened his grip on the youth, ran for the window and jumped." That was just brillant writing. I love how Qui-gon has realized his mistakes, and the magnitude of his actions and what he is asking of Obi-wan. By the Force, I hope they make it! That is a huge cliffhanger, I can't wait to see what happens! Please, don't hold us readers in suspense too long! Please update as soon as you can! Thank you!
TamsynDell 2007-12-02 ch 8,	abuseHey, congrats on your new nephew! And thanks for taking the time to write and post this update. Another very exciting chapter, and one with a potentially positive ending to boot. I am in awe at your ability to write fight scenes; and the interspersing the fight with an apparent vision of the future was very well done. At least Qui-Gon was in time and able to prevent Maul from abducting Obi-Wan, but what will happen now with Qui-Gon leaping out the window high above Coruscant?
Geri K 2007-12-02 ch 8,	abuseThanks for the brillaint update. Thank the force Maul did not slice Qui-Gon. At least Obi-Wan will prove that Maul had a double sabre.
James Beston 2007-12-02 ch 8,	abuseAw man. That was freakin awesome! Does this mean that since his identity has been revealed, Maul might not kill Qui Gon? You must update ASAP. This is a great fanfiction.
monkyluvr 2007-11-03 ch 7,	abuseplease keep going must find out what happens!!
Geri K 2007-10-14 ch 7,	abuseOk action has just burst through the door. Lets hope it is Qui-Gon and he doesn't make any more mistakes.
charie 2007-10-13 ch 7,	abuseQui-gon to the rescue?! I think the action was very well done Please, keep it coming.

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